@StarCluster You and your work gives me so much hope and pleasure. It's a rare gem to fine something so polished here and I count myself exceedingly grateful for stumbling on the pleasure of your writing. Amazing. Keep it up, I do not fan or gush lightly, but I felt like I had to.
@Kip412 Okay, I was worried for a second! Don't worry, take your time. Hahaha, I like started on your story last night and took notes on everything I wanted to talk about and it still took me 30 minutes to write the review. :D You know what else is cool, I'm sure you saw the tag, but one of my fans mentioned that I should check your work out last night after I already met you in the boards! Small world. I thought that was cool.
i know i read ur prolog in a short time but i am a fast reader, it's 4 pages and it took me three minutes to read which is normal to me. and btw you are a really good writer
So, I'm back. I spent the whole weekend revising and outlining my plot. I have started Chapter Two, but it's not yet complete due to how much time I spent revising the Prologue/Chapter One. Bear with me! It will be worth it, I promise. The revised copy of the Prologue is up though so if you have a second, check it out!
I'll be gone from now until Sunday. I'm sorry I couldn't get the next chapter posted for the weekend, however, I got some amazing feedback yesterday from several talented writers, so I'm excited that I have some time to really focus on this story and I think it'll be worth it! Be patient guys, and I'll be back soon. :)
@heyitsholland yeah buddy. I won't get to it tonight, I have to be up at 4 am. :( But tomorrow after work I have a lotttt of time, so you'll be hearing more from me tomorrow. :)