StarLight_Fantasy

New fanfiction on supa strikas if you're interested in the show....

Coffeeyo

Hey I was wondering if you had any writing advice for beginners am currently writing a supa strikas fanfic but  I might scarp it and start over due to the  pacing on my story 

StarLight_Fantasy

@Coffeeyo I'm glad you found my advice helpful!
            
            And yeah, you should probably go easy on yourself. I also just started with a simple one shots, and some headcannons :D
            
            And showing, not telling is SO important dude, I think that's one of the most important of writing.
            
            No one would like a narrator to narrate the entire story, let the characters do all the stuff!
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Coffeeyo

@Coffeeyo I might just start off with one shots and headcanons to make it easier for myself instead of writing a whole fic instead 
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Coffeeyo

@Coffeeyo honestly you are absolutely correct every time I reread my work I didn't like the pacing or how how I was telling more than showing in the story am still brainstorming and writing something new instead of keeping up with this one I do like the advice you gave because it gives me a new perspective of what I need improvement on and I thank you for that so am just going to go and do everything over  and thank you so much for the feedback I really appreciate it dude.
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Flying_Prist_06

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU @StarLight_Fantasy
          How many years old are you now ??

Flying_Prist_06

@StarLight_Fantasy 
            oh and look , now we both are the same age . at least for a couple days lol
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Flying_Prist_06

yep , its on 19th .
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FantasyCreature123

Hi there! Thank you so much for following me! ❤️
          
          Random question, but I'm curious about how you stumbled upon my account... Mind telling me? (Maybe through my cover shop?)
          
          That's all. Have a great day/night!

StarLight_Fantasy

@FantasyCreature123 Actually I came across your book named 'My art collection'.
            
            Btw they were AMAZING!
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