Hikari

@Coffeeyo I'm glad you found my advice helpful!
            
            And yeah, you should probably go easy on yourself. I also just started with a simple one shots, and some headcannons :D
            
            And showing, not telling is SO important dude, I think that's one of the most important of writing.
            
            No one would like a narrator to narrate the entire story, let the characters do all the stuff!

@Coffeeyo I might just start off with one shots and headcanons to make it easier for myself instead of writing a whole fic instead 

@Coffeeyo honestly you are absolutely correct every time I reread my work I didn't like the pacing or how how I was telling more than showing in the story am still brainstorming and writing something new instead of keeping up with this one I do like the advice you gave because it gives me a new perspective of what I need improvement on and I thank you for that so am just going to go and do everything over  and thank you so much for the feedback I really appreciate it dude.

@White-__-  From the book named 'The Kai Hiwatari Fanfic'
            
            
            
            And thanks for the follow back btw :D

@Flying_Prist_06 Happy new year!!

@Flying_Prist_06 XD

@StarLight_Fantasy 
            oh and look , now we both are the same age . at least for a couple days lol

yep , its on 19th .

@StarLight_Fantasy 
            Ohhh, okay! Thank you! <3

@FantasyCreature123 Actually I came across your book named 'My art collection'.
            
            Btw they were AMAZING!

@pokigirlmisty Your welcome :-)

@Rifa6210 Your Welcome!