Stargaryen1
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New story is here, prologue will be published later this week. Hang onto your hats, this is gonna be a wild ride.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/270996794?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Stargaryen1
BENNVIDAL
Bro, que paso?, porque no quieres contestar los mensajes?, te retiraras como escritor?
AlynaGuzman
When are gonna update Beth Greene twd
g010794
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Hey star, just re read TLOU book for like the third time I think now and I just wanted to say real quick that your fic really got me hooked into this app, though a lot of other books are either horny as fuck or the MC has way too much plot armor I gotta say I really like the realism that your fic has, its genuinely some like top notch shit, and honestly it doesn’t get boring after reading it over again, I really cant wait for Left Behind, TLOU 2 and any other fic you plan on making, of course take your time focus on yourself I understand that you have a life lol, just wanted to say your a really good writer and honestly reignited a passion for reading in me so thanks lol, have a good one man your a goat.
Lemming21
@g010794 It's a really interesting idea mate. I just hope Star is okay and good.
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So that brings me to why I think he would go to Seattle with Jesse, simply put, he doesn’t want Tommy and Ellie to repeat his mistake, the mistake of acting selfishly in a act of love, he wants to shield them from the guilt it wouldn’t bring. He wouldn’t know how late he would be, but he still had to try. He loved Tommy like an uncle, he loved Ellie so much. It would pain him for them to act similarly to him and feel this guilt he feels, all because he did something selfish. Perhaps him going after them to bring them back was selfish aswell, but to him it wouldn’t matter, he accepted a long time ago that he was a selfish person, hell he never stopped believing that everyone in their own way will act selfishly. Idk this is all just a theory I hope yall liked my yap session, I actually wrote so much that I had to split this shit into different parts so I hope whoever reads enjoys the theory, have a good night everyone.
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Rathmakers
Sorry for late message, but happy new year. I hope you’ve been good and taken care of yourself. Btw you don’t need to rush the LOU chapter if you’re busy, just take your time. I understand it takes time to cook.
TylerMatzuo
Hey bro— been a long time since we last talked. How are you? Hope you’re doing well and enjoying life!
QJessicaTargaryen
Merry Christmas and happy holidays ✌
MaximusCretinus
Hi!
I really hope you're doing well.
I don't know if you've already started writing or thinking about the sequel to TLoU Part II, but I'd like to share an idea... you can take it or leave it, I like your work so I just want to share.
What bothers me about Part II is the overt manichaeism: Jerry Anderson is the good guy, and sure, he has a moral dilemma about sacrificing Ellie, but that's quickly swept aside. The greater good comes first!
But there's a scientific problem: he can't hope to create a vaccine without an established protocol. Medicine has been built on the accumulation of experience over many years. You can't invent a cure overnight. Sure, humanity has known about cordyceps for 20 years and has studied it (albeit in increasingly poor conditions with the loss of specialized personnel and equipment), but without coming up with a vaccine. But Jerry can do it, and I find that suspicious...
Here's my idea: Marlene has known Jerry for a long time and she certainly has doubts about Ellie's contamination (if we consider the episode of the HBO series) and, over the years, questions about her immunity, because when she was bitten, Ellie was not killed. Marlene probably understood that Ellie's immunity could be linked to the conditions of her birth. What if she had told Jerry about it? He could have started experimenting on pregnant women in order to have more patients to test his ideas and advance the vaccine development process...
So Jerry is a kind of Dr. Mengele who, in the name of the greater good, performs evil experiments on prisoners... that would balance the story and the morality. Joel killed innocent people and loved Ellie, Jerry loved his daughter and also killed innocent people... and there's also the fact that Joel's lie wasn't totally worthless...
Not to mention that the prologue to the first part would find justification here.
Anyway, it was an idea I've been wanting to share with you for a while...
Take care of you...
Rathmakers
That’s a good idea, hopefully the author will tweak it a little to fit somewhat in their story.
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Rathmakers
Hey, I hope you’re doing well, I just wanted to say that out of all the Last of Us fanfics I’ve read, yours is the one that has stuck with me the most. You truly do have a great way of storytelling and making a new character fit in an already awesome story, which you made it work better than others. Hopefully this message reaches you and that you can understand how excited I am for your next chapter.
starwars582
Can I ask you a question
EmilyHall417
@starwars582 yeah I’m curious about that as well because I love the first one and want to see what you do with the second one.
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