StarkidStevie

@BeAfraidOfDark Your welcome! Or your friend is, I mean :)

StarkidStevie

Thank you for reading! To be honest, I'm not really majorly editing until I've posted the whole story - I know, very weird. I tried to limit the violence, especially since its domestic abuse. Thanks though, I'll keep it in mind :D

circlesnsquares

"Becoming Sonny Again" - I have just read the four chapters and -apart from the violence (as i don't exactly warm up to the idea of imagining cracking bones in my mind)- it was good and very exciting. I guess there could be a few changes e.g. There is only a few -not to may to really stress about- mistakes like commas being misplaced and captial letters where they aren't supposed to be. If those were changed and if you paid attention to the detail in this book, this could really be veiwed as a professional-looking story. Please don't lose hope and try to finish it with the same -if a little more- effort put into it. 
          ~circlesnsquares~