@StarlitRaven02
Is the sealed memory story actually complete
@Kingben10 Yes, I don't have anything more planned for it at this time. I've thought about doing Rewrites or maybe a Prequel, but right now, it is complete.
Is the sealed memory story actually complete
Hi just read your the world jumper story it's pretty awesome
I am also new to writing stories here
Just wrote my first and wanted you to check it out and get your opinion on it
It's my first so there may be mistakes here and there
@StarlitRaven02 Thank you for your opinion and support on this story Actually it a really interesting way I found to go about this story
@jotarokujo2121 Those are a few of my thoughts on the story. As it has an interesting plot. However, as always, it is up to the writer to decide how they write their story. The only other things I can say are always try and seek constructive criticism. I've improved massively with the help of others. People who will inevitably complain about your work but won't explain what you did wrong... just forget them. You firstly are writing for yourself, not others. Always remember that. On a side note, maybe downloading free grammar software would help you. Like Grammarly. It won't suddenly make your work perfect, but it can help you improve too.
Is thou dead?
Greetings, mate
Since you like reading, are crossover stories one of your favourite
@SithSupreme Thanks I,ve seen what you like and I,m 87% that you will like it My language might make it a bit boring since it's not my native one but it's so acceptable You will see
☆┊thanks for the follow!
i hope you enjoy your stay!
@MissNoir11 Oops, my bad. I said Hero Hunter because that's want Sung Jin-Woo is, a hunter. Realized it's actually "Hero Hunting" after replying.
@MissNoir11 No problem. Definitely enjoying what I've read of, "Hero Hunter." So, I'm sure I'll enjoy my stay.
Thanks for adding my books to your reading list. I really do appreciate it.
@AbdelRahmanIslam No problem. I'm a big fan of Miraculous Ladybug, so I'm always looking for new stories to read on the series.
So, I've been encountering a weird issue with my stories. When I write my stories, I check my work. I know, I don't encounter all spelling or grammar issues, but some of the things I catch after uploading are strange. Words become entangled and some words disappear. As an example one of the issues I caught earlier on the chapter 'The Gods Fall' in the story 'Sealed Memories Gamer' was "aliveyou arues".
I know, I didn't write this. I've been fixing the mistakes I see, but I'm most likely going to miss some. If anyone sees anything strange with the words in my story please let me know.
@AbdelRahmanIslam True, Grammarly is a great keyboard. Still blows my mind that it's free.
@SithSupreme yeah, I know the feeling. Also, there isn't a keyboard (I know) that can perform like Grammarly.
@AbdelRahmanIslam I could have sworn I replied to your message already. Guess it didn't go through. Anyways, it probably is Grammarly. I've caught it trying to fix my mistakes, but it misreads the positioning of words. So, when it fixes the mistake it messes things up. Been trying to write without Grammarly lately. Since, I feel like I can't really improve if something is holding my hand.
Thanks pal
I wanted to ask u what happened afterwards after Mavros left the MHA? Amazing story btw
@Takamori4Life I'm planning on doing an omake(is that what they're called?) Of MHA. I haven't decided if it would be the end of the story or at the end of one of the upcoming chapters. Read further if you want to know though. What I had in mind is Izuku would continue being a hero. He would gain some PTSD from the events that happened. Causing him to have a fear to use the other quirks. Bakugou learned Izuku can transfer the OFA, so tries to threaten for OFA. Which ultimately fails. Todoroki eventually learns to use his fire side after a long inner conflict with himself and his father. Momo decides to not let the lost of her quirk stop her from being a hero and uses her smarts to create hero gear that she uses to be a hero (*cough* Fem-batman). AFO comes into the picture and was able to save Shigaraki. So, the League of Villains slowly comes back into the picture. More was planned, but I'm planning an Omake or two to explain in more detail.
