StarryDayzzz

I was planning on having super complicated lore for the Agosti family background that linked with the other soon-to-be-introduced characters but like... what if they're all just a buncha rich Italian guys who just so happen to be very powerful for some reason... like who even needs mafia families anymore amiright? Idk. I feel like I don't even know enough about the crime world to even represent that in the story lol BUT if you guys would be interested in that typa stuff in this book then FEEL FREE TO SHARE!! I WANT TO HEAR ALL THE IDEAS AND QUESTIONS AND EVERYTHING!!!

StarryDayzzz

I was planning on having super complicated lore for the Agosti family background that linked with the other soon-to-be-introduced characters but like... what if they're all just a buncha rich Italian guys who just so happen to be very powerful for some reason... like who even needs mafia families anymore amiright? Idk. I feel like I don't even know enough about the crime world to even represent that in the story lol BUT if you guys would be interested in that typa stuff in this book then FEEL FREE TO SHARE!! I WANT TO HEAR ALL THE IDEAS AND QUESTIONS AND EVERYTHING!!!

StarryDayzzz

The room felt fragile, like breathing too loudly would break something. Like thinking too hard was dangerous. Yet Dominic found himself thinking anyway. 
          
          “You did good.”
          
          He looked up, brows furrowed in confusion. “Hm?”
          
          Gio blinked. Alonzo didn't react at all.  
          
          An incredulous scoff sounded across the room. “You heard me.”
          
          Dominic turned slightly. Leo was staring stubbornly at the floor, picking at his hangnails. 
          
          The man nodded, slowly. “Yeah… I did.”
          
          “Then don't make me say it again,” Leo grumbled, refusing to even look up. Despite the glare etched onto his little brother's face, Dominic found himself unable to stop his lips twitching upwards. 
          
          "Alright. I won't."
          
          Leo nodded curtly. 
          
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          Rewrote chapter 30 if yall wanna check that out. I'm slowly de-cringe-ifying the story lol

StarryDayzzz

@vivian1556 Tyyy I'm glad you enjoyed it <3
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vivian1556

Omg it’s so good, before and after 
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StarryDayzzz

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"A levels are so much easier than GCSEs" they said 
          "It's only 4 subjects" they said
          "You'll have sm free time" they said 
          
          WHO FUCKING LIED TO ME.

StarryDayzzz

@mary4mm ok yes you did (very very grateful still btw) but my teachers SWEARRRR "it only gets better from here " NO TF IT DOES NOT. I'M SISYPHUS AND MY BOULDER IS THE ENGLISH EDUCATION SYSTEM. 
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mary4mm

babes i swear i warned you 
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StarryDayzzz

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I find it funny that I started writing this book when I was 15, same age as the twins, and now I'm turning 17 in a few months but the twins are still 15 and only a month or so have actually passed in their world (I think?)
           
          Dw guys an update is coming eventually but probably in a few months because I HAVE MOCKS AGAIN FUCKING HELL

StarryDayzzz

Rereading old writing hurts bc why did I highkey fall off 
          
          LIKE I JUST CASUALLY DROPPED SOME JUICY DETAILS AND NEVER MENTIONED THEM AGAIN??? AND WHY WAS MY WRITING SO MUCH MORE EMOTIONAL THEN TOO??? (actually Ik why it was bc I was stressing about GCSE's lol but STILL)
          
          The 12AM rewrite grind is going crazy rn chat (MY FIRST DAY OF SIXTH FORM IS LITERALLY IN 9 HOURS ) 
          
          AND ALSO I'M SORRY I BARELY UPDATE ANYMORE I RAN OUT OF RESERVE CHAPTERS LOL
          
          Mk bye love you guys <333