AliRafid922

Hey I need some input on the recent chapter 18. I wanted to know is it good or not. Or should I rewrite it.

AliRafid922

@AliRafid922 thanks it's just that I felt that it's not nearly as good as if could've been. I will try to keep the next chapter more grounded.
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StarrySky180510

*But if you want to change, any vocabulary or grammatical portion would be fine.
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