StayFrost-y

What is this glitch... My stories are unopenable (at least by me) and their author is shown as my previous profiles. Interesting.

StayFrost-y

Writing an actual Novel. This is why I am no longer active: I an writing the book before entering the editing phase. I can’t upload any chapters because, unedited, my chapters are riddled with mistakes as usual. I am over 43,000 words into the novel and its definitely written more captivatingly than any of my other stories. 
          
          TL,DR: I’m writing big boi book and will stay dead fir a while.

StayFrost-y

Watching every marvel cinematic movie in chronological order (storywise). This is gonna take a long time but it’ll be worth it I hope

StayFrost-y

No and I kinda don’t want to till I’ve got all the movies is the back.
            
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ThatWeirdRaspberry

Sound great. Have u seen endgame yet?
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StayFrost-y

Writing an actual story with actual depth in the characters, plot and backstories, with actual story logic synergy with actual chapters and actual story structure.
          
          A lot of actual things. 
          
          I am not writing it for Wattpad but it will be posted to Wattpad when finished (not anytime soon, unfortunately).
          
          I haven’t completely given up on writing :)

StayFrost-y

I never payed any attention to this, but what is the difference between a male and female lead? To me there’s not much difference. There’s nothing wrong with a female lead, nothing wrong with a male lead. I’ve never stopped reading a book because of the protagonist’s gender. It’s good that females are represented well, but I don’t believe it makes a difference in the opinion. I think that everyone can be strong or brave or likeable. 

ThatWeirdRaspberry

(Is this a rhetorical question that u answered for yourself? Meh answering it anyway) 
            
            The thing is when it comes to gender. Normally (in my opinion + a heck of a lot of dystopian books) most books featuring the lead character are directed toward that genders audience. Not always true, but can often attract that type of audience. 
            
            Books like The Hunger Games and Divergent feature a strong female lead in an action like world, are not necessary only for the female audience. Since our generation is becoming more diverse (when it comes to genders) not only can a male hero can save the day, but a female one can too. And people are attracted to a character who seems weak but slowly develops (like tris) to become stronger and more powerful. Giving them a true hero’s journey. 
            
            As for male audiences, I honestly don’t know much about, not being a male. I often find the males in my class prefer a male dominate lead. I don’t see any guys reading books like (insert book primarily read by females here). But the males in my class often don’t read, so I can’t really say much. 
            
            No matter what the gender, both audiences of readers should be open to reading in both perspectives as it can give them and insight on what each gender is like, without the stereotypical comments running the vision and opinion of a character base on the gender. Such as: 
            Girls are always looking for love and squeal a lot and guys run around athletically and are as dumb as dirt (no offence, but remember this is a stereotypical comment). So we should be able to look past these things and enjoy a character for how he, she or they are. (Done. That was a hella long rant)
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StayFrost-y

For anyone that sees this, conjure the most exceptional description of a forest you can. 
          
          Winner gets my badge of coolness-ness.

StayFrost-y

It’s good, although there are some spelling errors (no auto-correct in comments haha) and it’s interesting, but it isn’t quite a description. A description of a place shouldn’t follow a character or event and should thoroughly explain the environment. 
            Still good though!
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ThatWeirdRaspberry

Dark and creepy typa forest? Here goes nothing. 
            
            The trees stood in an eerie silence. As if soldiers in a battle awaiting orders. The opening had deep scratch marks in the trees. I knew I should of been her but something made me feel like I should be here. I travelled deeper into the Forrest. The snapping of stick and rustling never got old. I travelled through this Forrest 5 years ago. On the exact day. On the exact time I revived the first scar. 
            
            TICK. The first sign. The sounds of gears clicking rung out into the forest. I felt like something was squeaking behind me. But I decided against looking back. 
            
            I begun to pick up my pace. I clawed my way through bushes twice my hight. The sound of footsteps followed my close behind. The dark trees looked over me. I was not going to die tonight. 
            
            One more night to survive. 
            
            A METALIC rung out. The second sign. I ran. I didn’t know where I was going but I was going away from here. It felt like I was trapped. The trees became a maze of my pain. Thornes littered the gravel pathway. I stepped on one. A pain like no other coursed up my leg. This was not going to be my end. 
            
            A long lasted SQUEAK let out as the barrier collapsed. The third sign. 
            
            What do ya think. Not exactly a Forrest more a story line. I was going for creepy, steampunk horror. The thing chasing the person was gonna be like a killer Android who killed people as a result of his crazy inventer. Sorry if this wasn’t what u were looking for. Meh. I tried. 
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