I’m in the middle of writing the Palpatine triplet fic we discussed. I’m on chapter 6 so it’s going pretty well. :)
I do have one question about some of the notes, though. This one paragraph kinda loses me on what exactly you’re trying to say. I’m not sure if I’m clear on who each of the “him”s is referring to at several points.
Palpatine tried to hide his displeasure and expressed his opinions to Biel, who didn't know why he didn't tell all this to him first and to Biel if... Biel said not to take it the wrong way, he said that Anakin didn't like him. say nothing because I didn't know how he was going to take it. Palpatine, supposedly offended and upset, told Biel that Engel was also his brother... and had every right to know everything, and that it hurt him that Anakin no longer trusted him to tell him what was happening to him because he didn't notice him being very distant. That Anakin was his and no one else's, that he wouldn't let anyone take him away from him. But Biel told him that Anakin would never stop loving him, Padme told him about her brother Palpatine's relationship with Anakin, told him to look a little scared that someone was going to take Anakin away from him and asked him if that young man was very important. for him, but however Palpatine did not answer him and left him alone.”
