Freakx3

Hello, terribly sorry for the late reply >.<
          Please read "Announcements and Updates" on my page to know what's happening >.<
          Anyways, 
          I don't really know what kind of writing tips I should give you...
          We all have our unique writing styles, so I can't say much.
          Just a simple thing: 
          When you're describing something, someone or some place, try to picture it at first, (getting it from a picture or a drawing is much easier) then try to write down what you see and make them into flowing sentences, I know this sounds cheesy and way too retarded and trust me, it will take time to do it, but you'll be surprised by the end results, just don't try to go overboard with the words cause they may bore the reader >.<
          
          I hope my little advice helped and if you have any questions, feel free to ask =)

sammy44680

hey! would you mind reading my story called angels and death? please comment on whether u like it or not. and maybe even if u like it vote and fan? that would be soo very awesome! well thnkyou!
          
          its about a guardian angel who was suposed to let his charge die but did not, because he believes she is destined for greatness. but his rebellion and lack of faith in his father the lord  will cost him severly.

Freakx3

Hey there! 
          I was wondering if you'd check out my new story: "Being A Bodyguard Of A Hollywood Jerk!" 
          It's okay if you won't, we all have different tastes and styles on different types of stories =) 
          
          ~Purplemiley0

SyerraJaneXoXoX

Hey Welcome to the family of Wattpaders:)
          Oh and i like your profile pic! Ashley Green rocks!
          I was wondering if you had some free time you could maybe give one of my storys a look at? If you cant then I completly underestand:)
          Umm my storys are called....
          "Love Shaken, and Broken" And "Mysterys of the Night" :D
          Okay Bye!
          
          <3 Syerra/ vamplover123