Hello, terribly sorry for the late reply >.<
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Anyways,
I don't really know what kind of writing tips I should give you...
We all have our unique writing styles, so I can't say much.
Just a simple thing:
When you're describing something, someone or some place, try to picture it at first, (getting it from a picture or a drawing is much easier) then try to write down what you see and make them into flowing sentences, I know this sounds cheesy and way too retarded and trust me, it will take time to do it, but you'll be surprised by the end results, just don't try to go overboard with the words cause they may bore the reader >.<
I hope my little advice helped and if you have any questions, feel free to ask =)