Hi, I've reread falling for Sierra that has been sitting in my library for a long time.
So, I decided it is about time to give you my thoughts.
1. Grammar mistakes. It bothers me a tiny bit. But did not hinder me from understanding the story. I always prefer clarity.
2. Bless Ethan. A true grown man character. One thing I'm not liking at all was when he said Sierra is his girlfriend as if that'll stop paparazzi from asking questions. That could've paint Sierra a bad picture. Tabloid does this misleading and exaggerate news. Might end badly but not.
3. Adeline. She was fine in the beginning so I'm disappointed that she turned to be a typical bitch character at the end. This entire chapter at her birthday party could be done differently.
4.axel's dad is sweird sneaking into their room. That's intrusive.
5. Sierra studied architecture but picked an assistant job? It's fine to just say she knew Axel in college, done.
6. Also, her love for Axel didn't have a starting point. She barely knew him. It's like Axel is her crush and she's just infatuated with him. I'd like to see what made her fell in love with him. From magazines and news but no actually interaction is a crush.
7. Sierra blamed Ethan for her guilt. What? This is childish. She put pressure on him for hiding his feelings.
8. Sierra is way to easy to win over. Axel barely did anything and she forgive just because he said sorry in a romantic dinner.
9. Axel is a childish unnecessaryly immature jerk that misunderstands things too quickly. There is no reason to punch Ethan. His mother died when he was 11 isn't an excuse to behave the way he did with Sierra.
10. There was not enough development between Sierra and Axel. Love just blooms out of nowhere.
But overall I did enjoyed it. I'm a sucker for husband and wife romance. These are my personal opinions. I'm sorry if I offended you. Thank you for writing a story and shared with us strangers on wattpad. Best wishes to you ♥️