Suhana_27

hey! i just dropped a sci-fi/mystery story i’ve been working on—would love if you checked it out and told me what you think!

Stella37788

@Suhana_27 I read your sci-fi book which I believe is the  sample one. To be honest with you I think the story was confusing for me. Because it started without any introduction of how anya ended up in that experiment and the world building is also important which the book didn't give. I think you should have gave some introduction on how anya ended up there and how her life was there and what this experiment is. So that's what I thought about. The plot is good but with more detail is needed. I was suprised when a you asked me to review it. I don't know if this message even meant for me. But anyways I read the story. I hope you give proper introduction and detail for anya and how she ended up in  that crisis
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