@StellaDollanganger
I rewrote the first part of my story (again). I think this one turned out much better. I feel my first version (especially as it went on) got more silly and unrealistic than creepy. This one is also much, much more subtle which I like so much better.
Thinking of rewriting "Somewhere they'll never find me". It's going too fast for my liking and instead of doing a bunch of editing, I'm going to rewrite it differently now that I have a better feel for it.
UPDATE
Man, why is Scarlet so hard to write? Agnes is so easy with her smooth talking, cold manner which is so much more my writing style. I tend to write the bad characters better I think haha!
Hey guys! I recently changed Sadie's name to Agnes. I thought the name Sadie was much too obvious and revealing to her character. Agnes just felt right to me. Kind of has an old-fashion and a dramatic sound to it.