I'm an aspiring writer, trying to learn as I go. My genre of preference is in the thriller/suspense arena, slanted toward young adult, but I have a lot of different things I want to write. 

I work in corporate training, and I live in a suburb of Dallas, TX. My family includes three sons, one adult and two twin 1st-graders. 

I'm looking to get feedback on what will make my stories better.