StevieTurner56

Just put a few chapters of my second novel 'The Pilates Class' on for reading.  The whole book can be downloaded free at Smashwords:  
          	https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/379611

StevieTurner56

A part of my first review from The Review Board.
          
          
          This read has touched something within me. This write has caused me to get misty-eyed and feel for all of the characters involved. To accomplish this within my hard (yet VERY Compassionate) Heart, tells me that the writer is Quite Powerful with their words. With the subject matters that were discussed (it has not happened to me), I sympathize for those who have struggled in those journeys.
          
          The spelling and use of certain words possess the feel of England’s English; a feeling that is both ticklish and a true delight for me (realise vs. realize, theatre vs. theater, duvet to describe a quilt, and “nappy” to describe a diaper).
          
          I love the lapsing of time throughout the story, where the reader isn’t bored about reading “Day One”, “Day Two”, etc. The time lapse kept the story moving forward, and actually had me read from cover to cover in a week.
          
          Some of the dialogue in the chapters ended in some awkward spots, namely and specifically where dialogue was ongoing, and then continues at the start of the next chapter. If the chapters ended in a cliffhanger style, then a bit more length chapter wise would have done no harm to the storytelling.
          
          Other than that, I saw no other flaws: a Rare Treat for us readers and writers.
          
          As I said earlier, it struck something within me, and it touched me deeply. This is certainly a book to pick up and read while sipping tea and nibbling on biscuits.  I rate this a 9 out of 10.
          “The Porn Detective” can teach many people a few things about dedication to the one they love, as well as loving themselves enough to let go.
          
           Overall, The Review Board rates this an 8.5 out of 10, and we highly recommend this read. Thank you for your time and likes, shares, subscribes, and comments are welcomed.