StianJebsen

Hey, just posted a short story that popped into my head, and I was wondering if you could read it, and see how it is. This is the first short story that I've written in a long time, so don't judge me too hard, but I'd appreciate the critiques none the less!

@StianJebsen in stores? You give me way too much credit.

@Skyhuntress no it's not. It's rough drafty.

@StianJebsen I should probably mention that the story with Jade "Nobody" is not on Wattpad. However there are assassins aplenty in turncoat.

Thank you for following me! I hope you enjoy my stories and I cannot wait to hear from you.
          
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Thank you for da follow!! :) 
          ~Shay 

I have unpublished The Legend of Alakir to see where I want the story to go. Before I publish it again I will have to figure that out as well as writing a few more chapters. (if not the entire book) I will also rewrite the current chapters and improve my writing skill as well as knowledge for grammar and writing...
          The cover shall also be changed and I will probably change Warlock into another word, though the name of the book is the same.
          
          If you grow impatient with me you may throw a subway cookie at me, thank you @Skyhuntress for the idea of subway cookies. 
          
          And to the 5 of you following me, check out her book Sentinel. It's awesome and very magicy

ok, now my second chapter of TLOA out.
          i really hope you like it! Sorry about the long wait, there were some... complications... along the way so I worked really hard on this.

Hmm maybe one of peeta in the cells, or your idea of what happened after mockingjay, or even a different outcome in catching fire like what if katniss got hijacked. Ha I hope some of these ideas help

@courtney457 thanks and your welcome. Very good fic BTW!
          I'm writing one myself, you have any tips?