Stonenewouse

Well, tomorrow’s Thanksgiving. I just wanted to make a post here and ask if there is anything about my stories, namely Rise of the Mimic, that you like and maybe don’t like which you can comment here.
          	
          	Anyways, bye
          	
          	Love,
          	Stone Newhouse

Stonenewouse

@Feenfiction 22 is not part of the federation anymore since she left it to marry Rohan and become queen of the Flower Kingdom. Also, I am going to tease the Mimic at the end of Metroid Deadly Sins…so if you see that Rise of the Mimic is on hold all of the sudden, that’s because I’m working on other stories.
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Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse Yes, I am saying that the plot is taking a little long to truly begin. I see that the chapters so far have been building up an air of dread, but because the stuff currently known about the Mimic is so vague, I'm just left waiting for it to show up or something so that the threat it poses feels real. Maybe you could have Samus and Agent 22 (if they're still both doing Galactic Federation stuff, I honestly forgot) mysteriously get a job that orders them to investigate the facility the Mimic is held in (which they wouldn't know, of course), and they inexplicably return barely alive, not remembering how they survived, or even what attacked them, but remembering only the image of the Mimic. It could introduce the Mimic as a dangerous and fearsomely unknown force while not yet fully bringing it into the story. I don't know, I'm just throwing that idea out there. Take as much time with the story as you need
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Stonenewouse

Also the reason why I’m reintroducing these characters is that it has been seven years chronologically after the Subspace and that’s a lot of time and these characters can have unexpected change in that time and maybe even new struggles like Link and Zelda being parents or Bowser trying to be good.
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Stonenewouse

Well, tomorrow’s Thanksgiving. I just wanted to make a post here and ask if there is anything about my stories, namely Rise of the Mimic, that you like and maybe don’t like which you can comment here.
          
          Anyways, bye
          
          Love,
          Stone Newhouse

Stonenewouse

@Feenfiction 22 is not part of the federation anymore since she left it to marry Rohan and become queen of the Flower Kingdom. Also, I am going to tease the Mimic at the end of Metroid Deadly Sins…so if you see that Rise of the Mimic is on hold all of the sudden, that’s because I’m working on other stories.
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Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse Yes, I am saying that the plot is taking a little long to truly begin. I see that the chapters so far have been building up an air of dread, but because the stuff currently known about the Mimic is so vague, I'm just left waiting for it to show up or something so that the threat it poses feels real. Maybe you could have Samus and Agent 22 (if they're still both doing Galactic Federation stuff, I honestly forgot) mysteriously get a job that orders them to investigate the facility the Mimic is held in (which they wouldn't know, of course), and they inexplicably return barely alive, not remembering how they survived, or even what attacked them, but remembering only the image of the Mimic. It could introduce the Mimic as a dangerous and fearsomely unknown force while not yet fully bringing it into the story. I don't know, I'm just throwing that idea out there. Take as much time with the story as you need
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Stonenewouse

Also the reason why I’m reintroducing these characters is that it has been seven years chronologically after the Subspace and that’s a lot of time and these characters can have unexpected change in that time and maybe even new struggles like Link and Zelda being parents or Bowser trying to be good.
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Stonenewouse

Hoo boy…I don’t know how I’m supposed to put this right…I’ve still been stuck on a writer’s block and I’ve been busy with schoolwork…but I have been considering cancelling a few projects and then focus on Rise of the Mimic. Here are the projects that I’m considering cancelling:
          
          .Super Mario: What If…?
          
          .Mewtwo and the Secret Rings
          
          Soo…Yeah…I’ve been considering cancelling these so I can both focus on Rise of the Mimic and think of less stories to focus on…but I don’t know if this is the right decision…So, if you want to, you can tell me your opinion and I’ll come up with a decision soon.
          
          Love,
          Stone Newhouse

Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse in my opinion, you probably should cancel them, or at least just put them on hold indefinitely, because honestly, you do have a lot of projects already. I really wouldn't blame you if you left a lot of them unfinished so you could focus on making Rise of the Mimic
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Stonenewouse

Hey, um, how are you all doing?
          
          Been busy with work, school, and also some stories but I do want to ask a little question: 
          
          “Which one of my OCs do you like the most from my Mario 3 story? Rohan, Chrissy/Agent 22, or King Rohan?”
          
          If you want to, you can also give me tips and advice about writing better characters, should that be necessary.
          
          From,
          Stone Newhouse

Stonenewouse

@Feenfiction It’s funny you mentioned that, since I’m planning on giving Rohan things Mario normally has in my stories for Rise of the Mimic, his arc being that he is still not over King Rohan and is struggling to be a leader along with Chrissy. But Mario still will have an arc that impacts his relationship with America.
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Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse I'd probably say Rohan, since you tend to always give him some sort of character arc and development in all the stories he's in. Sometimes it even feels like he should be the protagonist instead of Mario
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Stonenewouse

Hi, everyone. Little update:
          
          I’m starting college in a few days and I’m getting pretty excited as a new college student would. There is a chance that I may delay stories but we’ll see…
          
          Current story statuses:
          
          .Metroid: Deadly Sins (On hold)
          
          .Persona 6 Remake (On hold)
          
          .The Compendium of Lost Content (I’m thinking about it)
          
          .Sonic: Starlight Islands (Nearly finished)
          
          .America: Shadow of Dawn (Working on)
          
          .Tomb Raider adaptation (Coming soon)
          
          .Mewtwo and the Secret Rings (Will work on after finishing Sonic)
          
          Okay. After all that, I guess I finally have to say that there is still more coming on the way. Hope you all still love my stories.
          
          Love, Stone Newhouse

Stonenewouse

Hey, guys. Important announcement:
          
          I posted the first chapter of my remake fanfic, Persona 6: Reloaded. I know that I was going to do that as a future project seeing how I have numerous Smash Bros projects in works right now, including Sonic: Starlight Islands, but I just felt like getting that remake out there.
          
          Some important things to know about this remake:
          
          .The characters have Personas that relate to the new theme: Spies and outlaws that provide for the community
          
          .A new story that is somewhat different from my original Persona 6
          
          .C.H.R.O.M.E. and Himitsu Senshi from “Persona 6: World’s Most Wanted” will not appear in this new timeline
          
          .Eris will appear as a Persona of the Hunger Arcana
          
          .Stone Hoshi is now named Kiyoshi Hoshi
          
          .Psychotic Breakdowns are not a major plot point like in the original Persona 6
          
          .Abi from “Rise of Eris” will appear as an antagonist in the final arc and will be more related to Bucky
          
          .June Sullivan and a few characters from my cancelled spin-off “Persona 6: Alpha” may appear as cameos
          
          I really hope you like Persona 6: Reloaded and hope to see more chapters coming soon.
          
          Love,
          
          Stone Newhouse

Stonenewouse

Hey, is it weird that I want to make a Persona 6 Remake? Weird, right? Remake of a story of mine that is possibly universally hated? 
          
          The idea literally just booted into my head and I have been considering making a remake of one of my previous stories for a while now and maybe it’s time that I give Persona 6 some attention after a very long time.
          
          I’m still in the design process for how this would work but I’m still eager to see if a remake of my Persona 6 story would work. 
          
          Also, I think the title would be: “Persona 6: Live & Ready” (Working title) and the theme would be spies and outlaws
          
          Sorry about the rant. Just wanting to get something out of the way. Anyways, have a great day.
          
          From,
          Stone Newhouse

Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse I think that making a remake of the story should really just come down to how much fun you'll think you'll have with it. Believe me, I know a thing or two about that, since the main story I'm writing (which I've mentioned once before) is actually a rewrite of the original version of it, which I wrote throughout last year. If you'll allow me to indulge myself, I'd like to basically list some pros about getting to rewrite my own story, so maybe you could get some ideas, should you end up making the P6 remake. I'll try to keep it short, I promise (emphasis on "try").
            
            Writing the story again (remaking it, basically), now with a crystal clear vision of where the story is supposed to go, allowed me to fix the things I disliked about it, and work on what did to make it even better. One example is that I put (or, rather, "I'm putting", since I'm still writing it) more emphasis on the themes of the story, such as nostalgia, youth, and the ironic loss of innocence that the protagonist, Innocent Sun, goes through throughout the story. Also, I was able to fit in some bizarre cosmic horror parts literally pulled right from Lovecraft, which was really fun, and still is.
            
            In short, rewriting can be really fun, since it allows you to see just how much you've improved, but you gotta make sure it's something you really want to do, otherwise it'll become boring pretty quickly, since you know exactly what's going to happen in the story.
            
            I know you didn't ask for it, but thanks for letting me ramble, especially about my own story, since I thought it was an apt comparison to make, since I think of us as being on the same writing level. Also, if I'm being honest, I don't really have a lot of people that I tell about the story, but whatever - Keep up the good stories
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Stonenewouse

Important news:
          
          Well, today is my birthday!!! 
          
          That’s it. I just wanted everyone to know that. Anyways, I hope that you all still enjoy what I create here even though I will be moving onto the next phase in my life. (I’m not quitting Wattpad, by the way. I’ve got THOUSANDS of stories to create here)
          
          Anyways, I just decided to post this and tell everyone it’s my birthday. Anyways, take care.
          
          Love,
          Stone Newhouse

Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse Happy birthday. I hope the transition into that next phase goes well for you
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Stonenewouse

Hey, sorry I haven’t posted anything new in a while. Just having a lil’ writers block now. I had this in me for a while and I just had to get the plot for one of my projects out:
          
          Mewtwo and the Secret Rings: Mewtwo and Leaf discover a female Mewtwo in the Unova region and meet three Pokemon Trainers that are destined to be in the epicenter of a prophecy involving a set of rings called the Secret Rings and Deoxys.
          
          Also, did I ever tell you that I had an original story in development? It’s called Haunted Shadows and the story involves a struggling mother getting a job at a pizzaplex and surviving deadly animatronics.
          
          Anyways, love you guys,
          
          From,
          Stone Newhouse

Stonenewouse

That seems like good advice. Anyways, no, I scrapped that Rohan fanfic. But he will have a big role in the Rise of the Mimic duology and so will King Rohan and the numerous Variants of Rohan.
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Feenfiction

@Stonenewouse Sorry about your writer's block. I don't know if this advice will help, but I'll just give it anyway: the best way to get over writer's block (at least, in my amateur writing experience) is to just write until you get over it. I make sure to write something everyday (either a diary entry or some words explaining a drawing in my sketchbook), but I usually do my bigger writing projects (like chapters of my "Songs of Innocence" story) on weekend days. It helps me a lot, since I never feel like I could be wasting my ability to write.
            
            ...Or you could just wait until you see something that makes you go, "wow, that's cool, I wanna write something like that in my story!" I tend to do that a lot, especially when I get into a new piece of media (like Bayonetta, No More Heroes, or even RWBY, just for some examples).
            
            By the way, I was wondering, are you still gonna do that one story idea you had where Rohan is the main character? I'm asking because he's my favorite character in your stories, and it seems like you like to write about him (nothing wrong with that, of course).
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