StopForASec1

Hi,I was wondering if you would be willing to read what I have thus far on the story I am working on. I would like to get some criticism and thoughts to think about as I finish the first draft.

You there?

Hi

Just released a short story that is only 300 words so it is a quick read. It is meant for a writing contest but I love it so I put it on here too.

My new book is finally finished :) I hope you enjoyyy
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373988391?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=StopForASec1