detg247

Could you please do more of the toji story

Stopanidea

@detg247 sure, just sortin stuff out since i kinda stuck and in rewriting. Thinking of a way to nerf his ass to oblivion since he's been too chill with the gambling.
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zilhaziq

I just found a new RPG anime game the a story look amazing and emotion i can related there feelings maybe for me is call Heaven Burns Red well is up to you what type of crossover story idea you want.
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Official Release Trailer
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qA1mOkiaukg
          
          Heaven Burns Red Story
          https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ2ISCiX2xYqpv-Idz9Ghcj0IG4u2jK1h
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Event Story
          https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ2ISCiX2xYo4tH3xCMyxE4phA7zmU1jF
          
          Heaven Burns Red Bond and Memory Events EN
          https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL0lYvBiGqoHZ-F1j6bxSMpvT81ltFgKKz
          
          https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ2ISCiX2xYr4rHwhLnoM_jEoaqXfptHi
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Concert
          https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ2ISCiX2xYrhXv5c0sUVEvH4eP1P6aOz
          
          Heaven Burns Red info
          https://heaven-burns-red.com/
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Seraph Crew
          https://en.namu.wiki/w/%ED%97%A4%EB%B8%90%20%EB%B2%88%EC%A6%88%20%EB%A0%88%EB%93%9C/%EC%84%B8%EB%9D%BC%ED%94%84%20%EB%8C%80%EC%9B%90
          
          Heaven Burns Red - enemy
          https://en.namu.wiki/w/%ED%97%A4%EB%B8%90%20%EB%B2%88%EC%A6%88%20%EB%A0%88%EB%93%9C/%EC%A0%81
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Seraph Troop
          https://en.namu.wiki/w/%EC%84%B8%EB%9D%BC%ED%94%84%20%EB%B6%80%EB%8C%80
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Cancer (Alien Race)
          https://en.namu.wiki/w/%EC%BA%94%EC%84%9C(%ED%97%A4%EB%B8%90%20%EB%B2%88%EC%A6%88%20%EB%A0%88%EB%93%9C)
          
          Heaven Burns Red - Butterfly (Slime Race creature)
          https://en.namu.wiki/w/%EB%82%98%EB%B9%84(%ED%97%A4%EB%B8%90%20%EB%B2%88%EC%A6%88%20%EB%A0%88%EB%93%9C)

zilhaziq

@Stopanidea I don't know what you doing you making more random story ideas you make are you supposed completion and finish the story first before you add more ideas you drop on you like ... Look I seen this before if you going to add more story ideas you make you going to be end up like a idiot this guy just dead or give up no more story forever no motivation GriffinGower what happened to him is unknown.
          https://www.wattpad.com/user/GriffinGower/about
          
          What I was trying to say is you need to focus finish 1 or 2 story Frist and den you can add one more story but not to much if you have motivation like Valykarse this guy is smart like as far he did focus this story completely before make new story I don't know how he manages methods he did 5 chapter each week or months that is very clever way
          https://www.wattpad.com/user/Valykarse/about
          
          So that is future advise do not add to much story otherwise gone forever that what i worry about you.

zilhaziq

@Stopanidea good that all I want to hear and that is true about fanfiction writers don't take seriously because all their want is fun what they want you are right sometimes mostly.
            
            Also is seen i just forgot to warn you about the scammers neobook it happened in 2023 a random message without replying back suspicious god I hate scammers ruined everyone life. https://www.wattpad.com/story/347880520-the-true-about-neobook-and-more
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Stopanidea

@zilhaziq Yeah, i get it, but most books up here usually stopped without an actual ending, and it's pretty normal. 
            
            I guess normally author write what they have in mind without any plan so they just keep going until they're bored or it turn bad and switch to something else. 
            
            For me, yeah, i'm pretty fed up with the deadcells one, and when i make it, i just think about how cool it'd be to have beheaded in zzz and now, it's not really that exciting anymore. 
            
            And, making multiple books pretty much to test how well it does. If people like it, i have motivation to continue, if not, i just leave it there and move on. 
            
            In the end it's just unplanned writing that result in unfinished stuff. Honestly fanfiction writer aren't really taking it seriously, they just do it because they had fun doing so i guess.
            
            For now i'll focus on the ultrakill, rezero and disasterpiece, maybe when i'm finally bored with them i might go back to write Deal with it or the toji one. 
            
            Treat it like those games you never really play but still keep it in your pc so maybe at some random boring day you decided to play them and the motivation came back. With many books to work on, you can just go to another when you're fed up with the current one.
            
            ofc i'm not gonna make a bunch of books like that guy, if i did, i'll delete some that have the lowest read and continue.
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zilhaziq

Seem Deal with it story is very impressive crossover story I ever read is enjoy and funny at the same time ... Well perhaps I give you something about nonsense and good about Gmod Multiplayer crossover story
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388874720-rdm-rdm-rdm-arknights-x-gmod

Stopanidea

@zilhaziq thx bro, that'll help shorten the searching time
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zilhaziq

As much i love this duo crossover story so much so well i give you the links just in case to refresh the memory make a progress faster.
            
            Zenless Zone Zero Full Release
            https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL9LJDo1akA8Hi14NfHy604ezyxyK_bnNV
            
             Arknights Story Cutscenes Full Collection
            https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLmCeM4cWYl-BhJV2FJU5VhpGuXgwdufh3
            
            (Full Series) Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another World- [English Sub]
            https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLwLSw1_eDZl3RN7t6wesJqlUkSUN6FHKF
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Stopanidea

@zilhaziq Sure, i'll think about it. I've done some research about Dead Cell Beheaded X Ender Lilie u said, and yeah, it is pretty match. But the problem is i don't like  doing 2 similar work at the same time, that mean the crossover won't be real until i finish with deal with it (Or at least went it caught up with zzz storyline i had in mind, 1.3 to be specific).
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Feedback10

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Dear author, I am writing this message to you because I wanted to ask if you could give me a list of advice when writing a crossover story I also want to write my own cross over but I always encounter these problems when I write 
          
          1. My writing sucks I suck at synopsis suck Description, introduction dialogue and conversation and fight scene
          
          2. Unable to capture the character's personality 
          
          3. pacing and world-building
          
          4. Grammer
          
          5. Too many doubts
          
          6. Lezy to writing 
          
          Dear author can you give me a list of advice on how to mitigate these problems

Stopanidea

@Feedback10 thought soap2day is done for, they still going?
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Feedback10

@Stopanidea thank you i take that in mind 
            Have this 
            https://www.soap2day.cv/
            
            I hope you enjoy it
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Stopanidea

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@Feedback10 
            1. It took time, i start off really ass, actually made one related to dusttale but deleted it. I think you can maybe read more and write more, you'll get used to it.
            2. You have to understand the character to capture it, but it's fine if you don't. If you want, make an original character with personality of someone you close or even your own to practice, don't take it too serious tho, just chill.
            3. i don't know much about this since i do crossover, people who are interested in it already know how the world is, just how the character interact or how the story differ from the og. Pacing? It depend on the concept of what you making honestly.
            4. use grammarly or sumthing similar, me? I don't use anything. My gg will tell me if a word i wrote is not a real one, then i can fix it.
            5. do what you want, it's just fanfiction so no one gonna be that serious about it, write if you have fun doing it.
            6. If you lazy, that's fine, after all, it's not like professional writing and you have no deadline. I update fast since i had fun, but i doubt it would last long.
            
            And a reminder. Don't use AI, it's ass, you maybe can use it to fix your grammar or maybe tell it to give you some advice or suggestion but don't use it to write everything. It won't help you improve and reading it seem repetitive. I use it a bit for translation and maybe suggestion when i'm out of idea. Don't make one purely by AI.
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zilhaziq

I was wonder do you think you can make Dead Cell Beheaded X Ender Lilies: Quietus of the Knights that would be a interesting different crossover story idea you make

zilhaziq

@Stopanidea Of course you can take your time first completed book but if you plan make another one yes Ender has a sequel or you know this new game is call ENDER MAGNOLIA: Bloom in the Mist same world but a different kingdom story and different protagonist play as Lilac and her companion Nola but to your surprise there is a robot in there kingdom but they call Homunculi (ホムンクルス, Homunkurusu) 
            last Lilies has grow up this years seem appear in ender magnolia story last part seen after ender lilies True ending/Ending C is part of Canon story.
            
            ENDER MAGNOLIA: Bloom in the Mist Final Trailer
            https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9wD4brP7nA
            
            ENDER MAGNOLIA: Bloom In The Mist: FULL GAME [100%] (No Commentary Walkthrough)
            https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EcBkxMCfgJ0&t=3472s
            
            ENDER MAGNOLIA: Bloom in the Mist wiki
            https://ender.fandom.com/wiki/Ender_Magnolia:_Bloom_in_the_Mist
            
            Ender Magnolia - Homunculus
            https://ender.fandom.com/wiki/Homunculus
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Stopanidea

@zilhaziq Making the deadcells x Ender stuff. But it would be a oneshot or something like that (I won't publish it until i finished everything or most of the major parts) so it would take weeks or months. I'll make it as the first completed book here (hopefully). Ender got quite the interesting lore.
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zilhaziq

@Stopanidea thank you so much you know how hard to find a good Dead Cell book not so many new in the past of year's is to give a respect the franchise remember old game.
            https://www.wattpad.com/stories/deadcells
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