Stories_for_otakus

@Fadediamond *elite paragraph mode activated*

@Fadediamond *elite paragraph mode activated*

@Fadediamond  Haha,  i guess but i didnt mind. I quite liked them actually

@Stories_for_otakus 
            well your on your way to becoming an author. I just finished reading your second chapter (after two days. sorry. I was swamped in homework.) and I`m thoroughly intrigued by it. although I have to say it, I`ll probably prefer Marina over Ace. mostly because I cant really stand jocks. the sporty kind who get all the girls and then are jerks to the smarter kids. however. I probably (gonna switch that to a definitely) if he`s the guy who stands up for the nerds and geeks. even if it`s in a kind way or a harsh way. but disincluding that, there's also the possibility that the main heroine turns into a cute clumsy klutz. those ones are adorable and enjoyable. but I`m going to say this before ending this response. the transition, from horror, mystery into a romance seems like an interesting thing  and I`m liking yours so far.( But the mysteries in the beginning. those were a good starting point. introducing the "how" so to speak. basically how those characters met and what they will probably be doing. and then slowly showing off their quirks, faults, feelings and interests was a good  starting pinnacle. so good job on that).
            so basically...
            .I`m enjoying your content as always
            .I would prefer and want you to keep writing stories (any story will do. but preferably please continue this one.)
            . and the starting chapters have been great so far
            .also I`m noticing small gramma errors. so please don't worry about them. They weren't that great of errors and wherever they were it wasn't that big of a difference and it was quite easy to see what it was meant to be.
            so please don't beat yourself up about mistakes like that. just keep improving your mistakes, double check your writing and get friends to check it as well (as they may pick up on mistakes that you missed) and get their opinion of your writing.
            but your career as a writer will improve as you continue to write stories.so please keep writing and ignore hate.
            your career will only improve if you allow it

@Fadediamond  oh yea i finished 2 chapters with my new book :) its generally okay even though even i see my mistakes i try my best to fix it. I alot of kids lie my stories but i never mange to finish it XD but i do hope to finish some books that people will genrally enjoy. I manily write stories to show people how creative you can be and it makes me happy that at least 1 person enjoys my books :) one day i've actually thought that i want to be an author :P one day, one day XD

@Stories_for_otakus hehe no problem. and you don't have to read my books, I was just using it as an example. and besides, all humans can improve on their life at most points, but when they make something genuinely good with many great qualities, it should be noticed and praised. because many things need a lot of rework and adjustment. your book in my opinion was great. I only noticed gramma errors. you even managed to include a shipping in their. and nobody complained!!!! that's gotta be worth a round of applause, and slap on the back and your online name to go down in fandom history for not getting at least one rage comment complaining. and also, since you and your BF have found mistakes you can learn from those and if you choose to write a new story you can improve from those mistakes and make your other stories even better. or at least that's what I think. well I just noticed your new story was up some I`m going to read it now.