Storm0981

POME has been updated!

Paw256498

@Storm0981 How much chapters are you going to make P.O.M.E?
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marsha_gorshe

Sorry its out of a blue but I’ve been captivated by your story and really admire how vividly you’ve brought it to life. I'm a concept artist specializing in character art, scene illustrations, and book covers for authors. I was wondering if there might be an opportunity for me to illustrate characters, create scene art, or design a cover for any of your upcoming stories, all at a reasonable price.

Amazing-Writer

Heyy, sorry to bumping ya like this 
          I published a new story called the Stellar Odyssey, it's a PAW Patrol FanFic and I saw you do read PAW Patrol. So I would love to get some honest feedbacks on it :)
          Thank you very much and sorry for the inconvenience!

jaytom20

@Amazing-Writer you to huh. hes not active most times
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Storm0981

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*“I…I can’t do it! That fucking’ eco pup! I almost killed his friend, now he won’t stop chasing me!”*
          
          Rocky glared down at the bleeding, bruised dog as he tossed the tag next to him, causing him to wince in fear. “What’d you think? I was going to have pity on you?!” The mixed breed yelled as he slammed the dog into a nearby dumpster.
          
          “L-listen, man, just let me go! I was ordered to do it, t-they were gonna pay me a lot of money!”
          
          “Who gave the order?!” Rocky barked as he brought his claws up to the injured dog’s neck.
          
          “Yo-you’re fucking crazy…just walk away from this, man! These guys are more dangerous than before, you’ll be dead the second you step a paw in Livoughroux!” The dog stated as Rocky threw him down to the ground, away from the dumpster.
          
          “I’ll take my chances…”
          
          Crimson Streets. 2025.

Storm0981

Tomorrow, 3:00 PM EST, The story prototype for my first original story will release in my one shots book, here's a teaser:
          
          In the crumbling shadows of the city’s forgotten slums, survival is more than a necessity—it’s a battle. Survival and Spice follows Cinnamon, a twelve-year-old orange cat demi-human, as she navigates a world where danger lurks in every dark alley and trust is a luxury she can’t afford.
          
          Having escaped the clutches of an abusive former owner, Cinnamon finds herself in a grim fight for freedom against the relentless Red Cat Auction House, a shadowy organization that preys on demi-humans like her. When she encounters Mira, a young girl who has lost everything, Cinnamon is faced with a choice that could alter her course forever.
          
          As she shelters Mira and her brother Jace, Cinnamon’s past and present collide in a turbulent struggle against an oppressive system. Amid the fog and fear, she grapples with her own trauma and the haunting memories of a life once confined by gilded chains. Her journey is not just one of survival, but of vengeance and redemption, as she confronts the demons of her past and strives to dismantle the sinister empire that still controls the fate of her kind.
          
          In Survival and Spice, the quest for freedom is spiced with courage and bitterness, survival and sacrifice. Can one small cat with a scarred heart find the strength to fight against the darkness that once ensnared her, and will she forge a new path for herself and those she strives to protect?

Storm0981

I have something interesting coming out in my one shots book sometime soon, it’ll be a story prototype for a new original story of mine, here’s a small teaser:
          
          The narrow alleys of the slums twisted like the veins of a dying beast, pulsing with the life of those who had been cast aside. Rusted pipes dripped murky water onto the cracked cobblestones, and the distant hum of the city’s wealthier districts barely reached this forsaken place. Shadows flickered between the ramshackle buildings, where the forgotten and the desperate huddled in the cold.
          
          Cinnamon pressed her back against the rough brick wall, her orange fur blending into the dim light of the setting sun. Her ears twitched, picking up the distant sounds of laughter, footsteps, and hushed voices. Her eyes, sharp and wary, scanned the alley ahead, searching for any sign of movement. The slums were a labyrinth of dangers, and she couldn’t afford to let her guard down—not even for a moment.
          
          She shifted her weight, feeling the worn leather of her boots against the cobblestones, and adjusted the threadbare cloak that covered her small frame. It wasn’t much protection against the chill in the air, but it was all she had. Two months ago, she had left behind the life of warmth and safety, but also one of pain and fear. She had run far from that place, far from the man who had once called her his pet.
          
          Her stomach growled, a reminder of the scant meals she’d managed to scrounge together. There was no mercy in the slums, only survival. And she had learned that the hard way. At twelve years old, she had seen more cruelty than most humans would in a lifetime. But humans didn’t understand. They couldn’t. Not like she could.

Storm0981

Hey everyone! I just wanted to mention something, I've been re reading my first two books, Frozen Fire and A Recollection and while their events are still absolutely canon to the Frozen Fire series, they were done so long ago and have such bad quality that Frozen Fire - Reignited (And A Recollection - Rediscovered) when that releases, will be the true versions of those events in the series. Because of these rewrites, there will be some plot holes in Blazing Avalanche if you go from the rewrites to it, so it's likely that Blazing Avalanche will get a rewrite as well.
          
          I'm also hoping to provide an update on the fourth, and final book of the series, Ashes of War, sometime soon, so keep an eye out for that. 
          
          That's all for now! See you all next time!

Storm0981

plot holes or inconsistencies in Blazing Avalanche*
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