Winterbear601

.......Wattpad se Dil Tak....... 
          
          Ek kahani thi, "Singhaniya Siblings" ke naam,  
          Har lafz mein chhupi thi Pakhi ki pehchaan.  
          Par jab taale na khule, jab koi na aaya paas,  
          Pakhi ka dil toot gaya, mit gayi har aas.  
          Delete ka button daba, kahani gayi kho,  
          "Main likh hi nahi sakti" - yehi soch gayi ro.
          
          Tab aayi main, Anisha, ek choti si roshni,  
          Andhere mein jalti, bas tere lafz ki jyoti.  
          Padha maine har dukh, har sapna, har baar,  
          Samjha main teri kalam, samjha tera pyaar.  
          Raat bhar comment kiye, "Tum awsome ho dost",  
          Teri saansein shabdon mein, tu hai duniya ki sakhi.  
          Amazing ho tum, tumse behtar koi nahi,  
          Trust karo khud par, ye kahani adhuri nahi."
          
          Tune phir likha, phir mitaaya baar-baar,  
          Par main jaanti thi, agla pal, agla vaar.  
          Padh chuki thi main, dil mein basi thi baat,  
          Phir bhi roz nayi umeed, roz naya jazbaat.
          
          Phir aayi Akansha, "Story_cuppy" banke saath,  
          Jasoos si dost meri, dhundhti har raaz, har raah.  
          Kehti "Dekho yahan twist hai, wahan chhupa dard",  
          Uske sawaalon se kahani ban jaati nayi fiza.  
          Hum dono ne tujhe roka, girne na diya kabhi,  
          "Pillar hai tu Pakhi, tu hi hai hamari chabi."
          
          Pakhi Tu samajhdaar hai, gehra tera saaya,  
          Jab hum bhatke, tune raasta dikhlaya.  
          Akansha dimaag hai, soch hai, pehchaan hai,  
          Main? Main toh bas ziddi bachchi, teri shaitaan hu.  
          Ignore karo toh muh phula leti hu main,  
          "Arre baat karo na, main bhi toh hu yahin!"  
          Wattpad family ki laadli, sabse choti main,  
          Par pyaar sabse zyada, ye baat bhi sachi main.
          
          Na milna hua kabhi, na dekha chehra koi,  
          Phir bhi raaton ko jaag ke, ek doosre ki hui.  
          "Dost" naam rakha humne, ye lafz hi kaafi tha,  
          Khoon ka rishta nahi, par dil ka vaada tha.
          
          Aaj kahani poori ho ya adhuri reh jaaye,  
          Par ye dosti amar hai, waqt bhi na mit paaye.  
          Pakhi - tu meri rooh, Akansha - meri saans,  
          Main Anisha - tum dono ki, sabse pyaari umang.
          
          Wattpad ne milaya, shabdon ne joda haath,  
          Teen ladkiyan, ek dil, ek hi jazbaat.

Story_cuppy

@Winterbear601 arey hai bohut acha hai and you have to admit it
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Winterbear601

Heyyyyyy hello Namaste... Guess who??

Winterbear601

@Story_cuppy Ha wahi problem chal rahi thi to... But don't worry apsa kabhi nahi jaungi.... Meri wattpad family ko chor ka..
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Story_cuppy

@Winterbear601 ohh by the way I really missed you these days
            I was wondering ki aap kahan chali gayi
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dreamgirl754

Hey dost, tumhe new chapter ka notifications aaya tha kya kal?

Story_cuppy

@dreamgirl754 yeah vahi toh , aise kaise pta chalega readers ko that part is uploaded 
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dreamgirl754

@Story_cuppy Yaar. Pucho maat. Kal jab maine mera dono story update kiya kisiko bhi notifications nahi gaya. In fact mere announcements ka bhi koi notifications kisiko nahi jaa raha. Ab batao aise mein main kya karu? Bohot gussa aata hai mujhe Wattpad par. 
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Story_cuppy

@dreamgirl754 nahi , i didn't get the notification 
            Maine toh abhi randomly check Kiya to pta chla ki part aaya hai
            I think there is some problem in Wattpad i didn't get notification from one other story too
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KimAriya789

Suno. .maina ek poem likhi ha Siblings bond ka upar. ..tum parhka batao kesi ha ..Poem thori lambi ha to 2 parts ma dena par raha ha. ...
          ~~ Singhaniya Siblings ~~
          
          Dada ji ki haveli... yahan deewarein nahi, zakhmon ke nishaan bolte hain,  
          
          Jahan bhai-behen ka rishta har imtehaan se guzarta hai.  
           Abhishek bhaiya sab sambhalte hain, Vaishnavi bhabhi ke saath nayi shuruat Karna wo chala ha  
          Anaya didi sabka dard pee jaati hai, hoton pe muskaan, aankhon mein Nami...
          Ayushi-Arnav... ek doosre ki hasi, ek doosre ki baarish.
          
          Par meri jaan atki hai un chaar mein – Aahan, Aarav, Arushi... aur Abhir.  
          Ek kokh ke chaar tukde, par kismat ne kaisa khel khela?  
          Aarav ki khamoshi, Aahan ki aag, Arushi ki roshni...  
          Sabki duniya hai woh, sabki saans hai woh ladki.
          
          Aur Abhir.. haaye Abhir   
          Tu kya hai re? Dard ya dawa? Zahar ya dua?
          
          Bhai banta hai toh tere jaisa koi nahi,  
          Arushi ke aansu apni hansi se poch deta hai tu.  
          Aahan ko chidhata hai, Aarav ko hasata hai,  
          Teri ek awaaz se poora ghar mehak jaata hai.
          
          Par mafia banta hai toh... mera kaleja kaamp jaata hai   
          Aankhein barf, lehza zehar, saans bhi katl karti hai.  
          Wahi hath jo Arushi ke baal suljhaata hai,  
          Wahi hath duniya ki kismat likhta hai khoon se. .
          Hum readers rote hain kyunki hum jaante hain tu jhootha hai,  
          Par Aahan... uska bhai ka dil tere har lafz ko sach maan leta hai.  
          Kitna bebas hai woh... apni behen ko bachane ke liye apne hi twin se ladta hai 

Story_cuppy

@KimAriya789 yes , you are very good at writing  
            Aap develop kr sakte ho iss skill ko bye practice
            Keep it up dost (*best wishes*)
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KimAriya789

@Story_cuppy thank you dost ..wasa Poem likhna pata nahi kaha sa sikha..just yaad aa jati ha kuch lines to likh ka rakh deti hu ...and rahi baat rhyme words ke wo kya ha na Hindi is not my 1st language as I am a assamese girl so yaha assamese he daily lives ma use hoti ha ..isliya mujha itni hindi words ati nahi ha. ..To isliya asa hua ..but next time ma accha sa likhungi dost. ...Thank you for your complement. .ma meri Writing skill ko aur behtar banaungi. ..
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Story_cuppy

@KimAriya789 haan choti choti chize hai poem mein ko match nahi ho rahi rahi as in rhyming nahi kr rahi or something but it's common as you are not professional 
            But you have really wrote so good 
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KimAriya789

Sunooo naaa ... .ya ma kya sun rahi huu...Pakhi "Brother sister bond" delete karna ja rahi ha..samjao na usa ...bechari bohot Sad ha yaar. .mujha bohot bura lag raha ha ...Dekho na har baar usa hurt hona parta ha ...kitna motivated hoka wo phirsa start karti ha and har baar hurt ho jati ha  ..ham as a reader and as a friends fail ho gaya kya. ..mujha bohot bura lag raha ha ...please kuch karo ..usa samjao. .

KimAriya789

Ha wo to ha but ham usa full support karange...and ha mera pas ek idea ha ..dekho pakhi jyada tar apne chapters par target 80 to 100 rakhti ha ...to kyuna ham dono usa complete kar da..like inline comments and dusro ka comments pa reply...tab I think other reader vote complete kar de ya sochka ke comments to complete ho gaya ha to votes complete ho jaya to target complete ho jayaga and chapter aa jayaga. .to wo bhi khush rahagi. ..kya kehti ho. ..
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Story_cuppy

@KimAriya789 yeah pakhi ne dobara story re-upload to kar diya , but I am still worried........ Agar phir se response nahi mila toh usse or hurt hoga na but still we are here and i am lucky to ki mujhe tum dono jaisi friends mili hai
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KimAriya789

Heyy Buddie are you there ..

dreamgirl754

@Story_cuppy Best of luck for your board exam, Akansha ❤️
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Story_cuppy

@KimAriya789 thankyou so much dost for your support, thankyou 
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KimAriya789

@Story_cuppy ohh it's alright no need to say sorry ..I can understand. .well all the best for your exam ..give your best ..tension mat lo sab accha hoga ..tum kar sakti ho and karogi bhi  .. Remember here in somewhere of India Assam a gilr who believe you so much you can do it buddie ..
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