StrangerInPeril
Two year anniversary was 2 days ago! Thank you for all the follows. The reading lists are really just for me, but I’m glad that others can enjoy with me as well!
StrangerInPeril
galaxypande
Hey! This is a new horror story named demonic I hope you will like it so plz check it out
https://www.wattpad.com/story/388101550?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=galaxypande
itsnotzaahhh
Heyyy<3
I'm writing a new book called promises, im kind of new to this writting thing and I've only posted a few chapters soo would you take a look at my book and tell me is it's somethings missing or if I need to add anything to it and how you feel about my writing if it's terrible could you please tell me what I should to to improve it as I really enjoyed writting the few chapters and I really enjoyed writting it... So if you do have the time would you please check it out and if you did like the book can you vote on all the chapters
and can you also follow me I'll also follow you back
Thanks for your time loveee<3
StrangerInPeril
@itsnotzaahhh I just looked at the book, and the first few chapters are looking good (I don’t have much time today, but hopefully I’ll get to it this week). Your writing is great, and I wouldn’t have been able to tell that you weren’t a native English speaker/writer if you didn’t write so. I would say the biggest things to work on going forward grammatically are proper punctuation, such as “. , ? !” And capitalization at the beginning of sentences, and when using “I”. Besides that everything looks great! You may want to try some writing techniques to add flair to your writing, and describe settings and actions more. I will vote on all chapters later this week ♥️
_yasmeenarh_
Good evening,
Sorry for barging into your message board without your permission.I just wanted to introduce my book to you.It’s a mafia setting and I’m sure you’ll love it.
Enjoy!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/366613566?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Ink_Heart3d
StrangerInPeril
@_yasmeenarh_ I never check my message board but this looks like such a good book and I’m starting it right now!
StrangerInPeril
HAPPY HOLIDAYS Y’ALL!!!
StrangerInPeril
My ✨ M O T H E R ✨ just went through my text messages and she googled the words ‘switch’ pansexual’ and ‘simp’. She may or may not think I am in a relationship with one of my friends. She just came into my room to have the ‘talk’ with me and I am freaking out. My family is supportive but I know she told my strict dad about it and I am NOT ready for that conversation
StrangerInPeril
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HELP HALF MY SHIT IS IN POLISH; AND THE OTHER HALF IN ENGISH! IDK WHAT TO DO!
StrangerInPeril
I would like y’all’s opinion on the book I’m creating. Basically, a girl feels like she’s minuscule against her twin brother; the perfect teachers pet with a bunch of achievements under his belt. He’s the popular kid. The jock. The music prodigy. The boy with the girls in line to get in his pants. She’s the exact opposite. A strong opinionated girl in the “useless” drama club good at one thing; track. She has a touch of sarcasm, but overall, makes situations kinda awkward with it. She finally gets in a huge argument with her parents (could be about sexually, grades, high expectations). Eventually her brother gets pulled into it and her parents defend him with their life (could be verbally or physically.) Bruised, defeated, and high on caffeine, she sets off in the woods behind her house; the biggest no-no zone for the longest amount of time.
I don’t know what I want to do after this. Kinda wanna make it into some kinda fantasy romance. I want to include either vampires or werewolves; but not in a weird twilight way. I’ll probably wait a couple months to do this but I just need opinions on it, since all my friends really don’t like romance. I don’t want it to be a basic werewolf novel (if you’ve read one you’ve read them all.) Please help! ♥️
