TALan9957
Hiiiiii, I really loved your Ahsoka book, and I was hoping you could give me suggestions. Even though my book has more views, your storytelling is immaculate, and I was hoping you could help. Anyway, in turn I’ll vote for chapters and recommend it, but if you can help that would be great. Have a nice day!
TALan9957
Thank you so much and I hope your computer gets fixed soon, writing without one is HARD. Have a good day/night, thanks and bye!
StrawberryCreme23
Hello! I’m so glad you like it so far! I am hoping to write more soon but my computer is broken and I haven’t gotten a new one yet. Ofc I would love to help!!! One thing I always make sure to do is to is when describing things I like to show rather than tell. I like to focus on descriptions a lot, it helps give the story good pace and leaves room for more plot. Rather than going from scene to scene, I like to explore the characters perspective, and try to make them as “human” as possible! Let me know if you need anything else! And thanks again!