@StrawberryMilkSnake First of all, thank you very much for the answer ( and GREAT FOR THE BOOK, CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT)
As for the rest, I was suspecting that at the end I should probably translate the all book in English . ( maybe I will publish 2 version….the original one, and the translated one, I don’t know)
You see, I’m not very interesting of gain votes or something like that, I just have a story in mind but I don’t want to keep it for my own. Even if I found quite enthusiastic to put so much effort and personal thoughts and feelings in a work like this, as a personal experience to enjoy, I would actually like that other people would read my story, maybe enjoying it too.
Besides, how can I get if is it worthy , if I don’t, at leat, try to confront myself with other people.
But I'm probably panicking for nothing and just need to try.
As for the possibility to read my story and help me with the correct comprehension and grammar in English, I really really thank you. You are very kind for that.
Maybe I’ll have to write a little more, before starting translate, so I can give you more chapters to read. Besides I have another question for you: I usually like long chapters, but I suspect that mine are too long…so, based on your personal expiries, how long a chapter should be?
In any case , really thank you for your great kindness.
P.S. for Italian beta readers, is more complicated….I never found a big community that actually knows about Undertale, and even if I have a couple of people very close to me, I’m very embarrassed to show them the script. But I’ll found a solution for that
Let me know how can I share a beta version with you, so we don’t have to use the comment here.
Thanks again
Have a Wonderfull day ;-)