Minsung lover

Happy birthday to Hyunjinie!!!!!!!!
          <3

Heyyy!! sorry I took so long
          I read your book!! 
          I think you have an amazing idea and base first of all!! 
          I love how you went with the real story!!
          If you want my opinion—
          Don’t give up on it!! Keep writing- especially if it makes you happy
          As for what I would “change” — maybe instead of a long paragraph, i would try and add more background of the characters, and maybe more conversation— like instead of telling us what happened, maybe try and show us!! 
          (Like kinda try to write it for readers like it’s the first time for them hearing about stray kids!! - if that makes sense)
          But I do like it!! Keep going❤️
          
          Also- I’m so sorry about everything you went through❤️‍ I’m sure you’re an amazing person and you deserve the best❤️
          Hope i helped somehow!! :))

HAIIIIII
          I read ur book 
          I must say im really sad u had to go through that
          I hope u can leave that behind and live ur life right now full of happiness
          Im also really happy that u like ur new adoptive family 
          
          Now back to the book
          I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEE THE WAY U WRITEEE
          ITS LIKE SO ASTHETIC AND PRETTY FRRR
          The way u described it so damn good like I have no wordssss
          So since u asked me if u might continue it 
          
          I would say yes 
          If u want to leave it like that ofccc what u did till now its perfectttt
          
          But I would say u can add like their journey and their achievements 
          Maybe also the mama 2025 so when they won the AOTY (that was a veryyy emotional one)
          So their hate 
          Their remarks 
          The way they proved everyone wrong with their music 
          Ykkk
          
          Ofc its up to u
          I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEE WHAT U DID TILL NOWW

Also, I love ur pfp btw!!!

Hello!!! ik u probably don't rly know me, so i'll js explain why i am here!!
          1st, my name is nocturnyx!!!
          So, i went on skz1verse's acc to ask them smt, and I saw u asking for them to read ur work and see if u should continue!!!
          So, since I didn't have anything important to do, I read ur story!!!!!
          Idk if u would've wanted anyone else's opinion, but hopefully u don't mind me tell u mines!!! ur work is RLY good, and i'd js say the only two things u need to work on are spacing (the paragraphs) and some minor grammar mistakes!!!
          
          hope u have a lovely day and pls stay hydrated!!!!