Straykidsminsung02

The life freaking sucks

Nocturnyx_afterdark

Hello darling!!!!!!

Straykidsminsung02

@Nocturnyx_afterdark stop you are such a good person! Than yo really I appreciate it! (My old parents said i was such a burden fag:> )
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Nocturnyx_afterdark

@Straykidsminsung02 Yayyy!! i like calling ppl important to me darling!!
            Darling, idk abt anyone else, but ik everyoen on here is not, and never will be tired of you ❤️ ur luved and important!!
            U r NOT A BURDEN *gives u a hug*
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Straykidsminsung02

@Nocturnyx_afterdark is totally fine if you call be darling m> i like it.
            I am not fine because like I feel everyone is tired of me and everyone is going to know my background and I hate it. I am sorry if I am a burden
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ffoxinyy

Heyyy!! sorry I took so long
          I read your book!! 
          I think you have an amazing idea and base first of all!! 
          I love how you went with the real story!!
          If you want my opinion—
          Don’t give up on it!! Keep writing- especially if it makes you happy
          As for what I would “change” — maybe instead of a long paragraph, i would try and add more background of the characters, and maybe more conversation— like instead of telling us what happened, maybe try and show us!! 
          (Like kinda try to write it for readers like it’s the first time for them hearing about stray kids!! - if that makes sense)
          But I do like it!! Keep going❤️
          
          Also- I’m so sorry about everything you went through❤️‍ I’m sure you’re an amazing person and you deserve the best❤️
          Hope i helped somehow!! :))

ffoxinyy

I like it as it is!! No need to change anything :) keep goingg!!
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Straykidsminsung02

@ffoxinyy thank you I am going to think about it ;D
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skz1verse

HAIIIIII
          I read ur book 
          I must say im really sad u had to go through that
          I hope u can leave that behind and live ur life right now full of happiness
          Im also really happy that u like ur new adoptive family 
          
          Now back to the book
          I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEE THE WAY U WRITEEE
          ITS LIKE SO ASTHETIC AND PRETTY FRRR
          The way u described it so damn good like I have no wordssss
          So since u asked me if u might continue it 
          
          I would say yes 
          If u want to leave it like that ofccc what u did till now its perfectttt
          
          But I would say u can add like their journey and their achievements 
          Maybe also the mama 2025 so when they won the AOTY (that was a veryyy emotional one)
          So their hate 
          Their remarks 
          The way they proved everyone wrong with their music 
          Ykkk
          
          Ofc its up to u
          I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEE WHAT U DID TILL NOWW

skz1verse

@skz1verse AHHH IM GLAD U LIKED THE IDEAAAAA
            IM SURE UR DO GREATTTT
            IM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING ITTT <3333333
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Straykidsminsung02

@skz1verse oh my god i am definitely going to do it thank you again for reading it and giving me ideas >3
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