Strel_Al

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Yo, I want to rewrite " The Learning process" as it's fucking dogshit, basic as shit. Also it was a spur in the moment story and I want to recreate a better mc for it. 
          	Also I have a story solo story for ahri coming soon. I will soon release it. I have an Idea for the Akali Solo Story that I hope you will enjoy.

mariohiginio

@Atnavim can't wait
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Strel_Al

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Yo, I want to rewrite " The Learning process" as it's fucking dogshit, basic as shit. Also it was a spur in the moment story and I want to recreate a better mc for it. 
          Also I have a story solo story for ahri coming soon. I will soon release it. I have an Idea for the Akali Solo Story that I hope you will enjoy.

mariohiginio

@Atnavim can't wait
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NaughtyDog6000

Been enjoying reading the learning process the last couple days (got 2 chapters to go) Just gunna ask if it’s still being updated or is on hold/do you plan to finish it?
          
          Thanks,

Strel_Al

@NaughtyDog6000 That story was just a spur in the moment. I didn't really have an expectation to the growth of popularity towards the story. It makes me laugh rereading the horrid basic plot that I had written. Which is why I want to rewrite it. I also hate harem stories, and I couldn't believe that i had wrote one. Your informative input is a help.
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NaughtyDog6000

P.S maybe Change the description of the book if you plan on doing a rewrite/not updating it for a while
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NaughtyDog6000

@Atnavim I just finished reading the last chapter and the one thing that annoyed me was the inconsistencies in the mc, specifically after being forced into working for kaisa by kassadin but other than that It was very unique and interesting (other than the generic as f start where he gets a ticket to their show that happens in like 9/10 kda stories)
            Overall I liked it, it just felt like there was to many plot threads created by you thinking that something would be interesting then not getting the chance to follow through with it as you thought of something new.
            
            This probably wasn’t coherent soooo…
            Good luck with whatever you choose to do
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Strel_Al

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Fuck me hand up at work, had to get stitches. Now I can't work but the fucking throbbing feels like its fucking burning but at least i can write the stories... if i have motivation to do do