Stvrlightstories

Back when Mateo played hockey <3 I’m sure it was something like this… 
          	
          	https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTYhfBL2a/

Stvrlightstories

Fun stuff happening!! 
          
          So like I mentioned, I am rewriting my books. DONT PANIC! Nothing is changing. For the most part it is just grammar and punctuation and spelling that’s getting fixed, but I felt like this was important before I went on writing more. I had some gaps to fill in the first and second book. Some conversations were added, tiny moment. But none of it changed the plot and the story! Tbh, it just got better. So over the next week or so you’ll notice Fated Nirvana being changed around a bit. Then eventually Fated Risk. And then finally Fates Games will be finish! 
          Miss yall, but I’m coming back slowly. At my own pace already thinking about Kirsan just not fully ready to put him on paper. 

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I’ve start to rewrite Fated Nirvana and before I get to far, I need a bit of feedback. Was there anything that lacked in that book? Anything you’d like to have been added or explained better? Things you hated? (Don’t tell me Mateo’s and Lily’s arguing because that later plays a role in Lilys book) and don’t say Lily. I love her. I refuse to change her. 
          I get so much hate on her, but like why does everyone expect to love every character? She’s not built for you, but as her own being. She’s complex has a lot of flaws and much of her issues were showcased. Idk why she gets so much hate when I find her relatable. Jesus not everyone likes Mateo, and Lily is just one of them. Anyway. Rant over. Back to the rewrite… waiting on comments :)

therealzyazmina

Loved it how it was!!! Nothing is lacking or missing!!! 
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Madisonpryce

i loved it just how it was
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Stvrlightstories

Stvrlightstories

@yaditoro55 Everytine I see something like this it heals me a little :) 
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yaditoro55

AHHHH I love this  this heals my souls since the book is finished
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Stvrlightstories

Wow… Fated Risk has come to an end. I’ve officially hit that complete button… and I’m actually crying. I can’t thank you guys enough for keeping me motivated and inspiring to keep writing. Your support means an incredible amount to me. Maddox and Sophia did many things to me, but they healed an inner broken part of me. One that’s always been scared of risk. 
          
          So whats next? 
          A few things. 
          
          1. I really want to finish Fates Games because that’s what started it all. So you’ll see that being edited and published.
          2. Fated Nirvana is getting a minor rewrite. I mean just grammar stuff and formate. I will be adding tiny detailing in that i missed the first time I was writing it. I was still learned then, and tbh had no idea where the book was going. So you’ll see edits there.
          3. The first half of Fated Risk will be edited also. Just grammar stuff. Nothing special. 
          
          AND 4…. 
          Kirsan’s book… I promise to start this soon. My only concern is Olivia’s character. She’s not going to be everyone’s cup of tea. What do we think of her so far? Also.. since this story has a really long time line (A few years before Fated Nirvana and ending somewhere after Fated Risk) I have two ways of writing it. First, I jump back and forth between the past and present. Other, I just go start from finish. Opinions?
          
          5. I know for a fact i have a bonus chapter for Fated Risk, I just need to find it. I wrote it long before the book even. Once I find it and edit it, I promise to point this.
          
          For now… this is me taking a vacation. I’ll be around here, peeking in on your comments and responding to anyone to posts. 
          
          If you have any suggestions or ideas for Kirsan’s book you’d love to see, I’m all ears. I have only one chapter that I’m fully committed to and everything else is still building. 
          
          Again! Thank you all for the support. I love you all soooo much <3
          

yaditoro55

I’m crying  I can’t believe it’s ending, for Kirsan’s book I think it’d be better if you go from start to finish, it’d give more development into the book if that makes any sense at all, but it’d build up things, I’d like to see like Kirsan’s interactions with Olivia since highschool. I absolutely love how perfect well Olivia’s personality fits with Kirsan’s (and how Maddox is their personal cheerleader)
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HReese_07

Can’t believe their book has come to an end omg!! Loved literally every second of it and can’t wait for what’s next. I’m so sad their book is done but so so happy with how it ended <3 
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ILoveGayKidsTVShows

ahhhhh i can’t believe it’s actually coming to an end! i am like actually ab to cryyyy ❤️❤️❤️
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