Styleswhut
Thanks for everything
Styleswhut
Styleswhut
@palominolane thank you! I would love for you to give me as much feedback as possible! Also thanks for the advice, I have just written a new chapter and thought about what you said. Now I read back on it, it definitely sounds better.
palominolane
that's ok anytime... I have actually just finished an article on Showing not telling if you are interested its at http://www.wattpad.com/40639746-heroes-insider-weekly-rise-to-fame-show-not-tell I'm also offering one reader that votes... a critique/feedback and votes on their story... good luck and I'm so glad you have gone back over it... its the bset way to learn :D
Styleswhut
@palominolane Hi, no problem with the follow! I am currently writing a book of my own and I need as many followers as I can get so I would much appreciate if you could help with that? Thanks!
palominolane
Hi there, it's a long process getting reads. My advice is to really look at the tags you use. TO try to have a really good eye catching cover and update regularly. It took along time for me to get reads... so just remember what you are writing for. For your own enjoyment so you don't get caught up with getting reads. Also write about something that you know and your experiences it makes stories feel real and relatable. Good luck if you need some feedback on your story letting me know and I will put it on my list, I don't do shout outs because I will be inundated. Feedback however I am happy to provide :D
palominolane
G'day Harry's woman ;) welcome to wattpad! Where you will find a million 1D books! Thank you for the follow I really appreciate it! if you are looking for something that is a bit out of Harry's domain but is teen/humour/horses giving Avalon a go... hopefully you will enjoy it