Also I recommend changing your first chapter up a bit, to me it reads more like a summary which i don’t know if you were going for or not. Make is so when it’s describing the events of what happened instead of making it read like a summary make it more read like a fairytale. Sorry if that doesn’t make much sense i don’t know how to describe it better then that, but making it read more like a fairy tale makes it easier to digest instead of throwing events in the way. :)