Subaru-dono's conversations

Justreadandgaze39

7 days ago

Thanks, for adding my story to your reading list! The third parts coming tomorrow! Loves you<33

Niccikin9

Dec 01

Hey doll  you are officially the first to add my story to a reading list. That makes you a very valuable RugRat. You will be getting a shout-out on my next chapter and added to my "mentionables wall"!!!

Rosielove337

Nov 12

Hii darling, thank youuuu for adding my story!!
          I hope you like it!!
          Loveeee youuuu!!

T_M_K_T_R_5

Sep 25

Thank you for adding my book in your reading list:)

RedPinkBlackRose

Sep 05

Thanks for adding my story to your reading list!

Kuroitsuki7

Jun 15

hey there, I have noticed that you put my story in not to read. Can you maybe tell me what was it that you did not like? 
          I want to improve my writing you see...
          I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an honest review...

ForgivingMess

one last thing I recommend is getting a beta reader, if you done have one already

Jul 23 • Reply

ForgivingMess

i said breaks twice on accident lmao

Jul 23 • Reply

ForgivingMess

Also I recommend changing your first chapter up a bit, to me it reads more like a summary which i don’t know if you were going for or not. Make is so when it’s describing the events of what happened instead of making it read like a summary make it more read like a fairytale. Sorry if that doesn’t make much sense i don’t know how to describe it better then that, but making it read more like a fairy tale makes it easier to digest instead of throwing events in the way. :)

Jul 23 • Reply

_hruaii

May 20

Thanks for adding my shitty story to ur reading list✨✨

heizerxavi

Apr 22

Thank you for adding my book into your reading book. Have fun Reading. (｡’▽’｡)♡

calvin_withno_hobbes

Mar 09

Thanks for adding my book to your list!!! <3333

Redcoffen

Feb 15

It’s not hun (Enchante)  just updates every month im trying to make the paragraphs longer