YOUR LOCAL SOCIALLY AWKWARD EXTROVERT

Hey guys, so if you haven't read my last update on Gemini 64, part of it was just asking for feedback. Please, I really do want feedback on how that book is going and if I need to change or add somethings. If you think I am doing good, then please do tell me. I am just really struggling with whether I should continue to write or edit all the existing chapters. I feel less confident about my writing so it's become harder. So, please please PLEASE!!! tell me how I am doing and what I could be doing.  Thanks and have a lovely everything.
          
          Confused Deer

Ok, so I edited the second chapter, so if you have already read it, you're going to need to read it again because I made some MAJOR changes. Hope you guys like them because I nearly lost my mind overwriting this.