Oh, don't worry, my writing sucked when I was first starting out; it was a wall of text with no spaced and a lot of errors. A few tips that really helped me out were 1., make sure to divide your writing into paragraphs, it makes it look much cleaner and more like a physical book(and more people read it when it's like that, ehehe–). 2., try to keep your grammar and punctuation on point. Reading other people's writing and seeing how punctuation is used and remembering mistakes you see is very helpful while doing this. 3., let your imagination act up as much as it wants. Like, let it run rampant and think up and spit out as many things as it wants like a malfunctioning Gnome-sucker-up-inator that's gonna start gnome-ageddon on Phineas and Ferb's backyard beach. Then you pick out the best things out of that maladaptive idea junkpile(especially the most engaging ones), and make something. You never wanna do something basic though, because then there will be tonssssss of other stuff like it; that's another reason why it's good to read other people's writing so that you can be absolutely sure yours isn't like anything else you've read. That's just what I do, at least. But, to each his own, I'm not anyone to tell you what to do. Just remember that the world is at your fingertips, and you can write anything without fear of mistakes. :>
