Hy darling,
Where have you been hiding? You are a brilliant author. I am speechless. It is short but if you can write something that touches the heart of such a person there is no doubt about your talent.
You should definitely write more stories. Surely one day they will become super hits.
I wish you all the best for your all works. And I say again don't waste your talent keep writing. ❤️❤️❤️❤️