Suggoi-Senpai

All right people around the world, 
          	Be ready for the new upcoming season of The Lost Endings: The Convention Of The Bloods Oath.
          	
          	NO hype, sure thing. Well could not ask more but to help me fix it by  pointing out those mistakes I have made, as I am a completely  amateur here.
          	
          	BUT no worries people, you will  be proud by helping me out.

Suggoi-Senpai

All right people around the world, 
          Be ready for the new upcoming season of The Lost Endings: The Convention Of The Bloods Oath.
          
          NO hype, sure thing. Well could not ask more but to help me fix it by  pointing out those mistakes I have made, as I am a completely  amateur here.
          
          BUT no worries people, you will  be proud by helping me out.