ReWINed1107
Yeah sure. No worries, if you will have an extra time, I know how stressful this new normal of blended learning. May I also receive feedbacks from you. Thanks.
SuicidalPen
ReWINed1107
Halfway done reading your story. I can fantasize the world you have created, their hierarchy and powers. May I suggest if you will just accommodate this idea, the elaborate origin of the species and other creatures or names of species not yet mentioned in any fantasy book. The flow of the story is good and absorbing. Maybe you can create that for the sequel. I am enjoying this one.
SuicidalPen
@winsome1107 Hi, I appreciate your feedback and I just finished reading the first part of your story. I really enjoyed reading it. The thoughts and words chosen and how much you showed the readers about the real face of reality. If I have the time I'll finish reading it. If I have known it before, I would love to spend my summer vacation reading it. However, my schedule as a college student stress me out and I can't find some extra time to read it. On the other hand, I promise to finish it... Again, thank you very much!
ReWINed1107
Sure. It is not that polished though, needs more editing, sentences and format perhaps. Kindly focus on the thoughts. Thanks.
ReWINed1107
Thanks for following me. I'll also add your work on my reading lists, and give you feedback. Thanks hope you'll read my work.
SuicidalPen
@winsome1107 Thank you too, sir. It would be nice to hear your feedback. I'll try to read your stories too if I am not busy with my schoolwork.
ReWINed1107
Thanks for following me. I'll also add your work on my reading lists, and give you feedback. Thanks hope you'll read my work
SuicidalPen
At natapos ko na nga po ang pagpa-publish sa GMAHKI : A Risky Investment... HAhahahahha! Tamang liwaliw kahit stress na sa college life
SuicidalPen
Last 5 Chapters for GMAHKI!!!!! Actually tapos na talaga siya kaso nawala pala ang copy ni Watty... Buti may back up ako hahahahaha... Hope you'll enjoy reading my stories... I also have 1 upcoming story... The Secrets of Axia... A new different genre naman (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
SuicidalPen
Childhood melodies had been updatedd!!
SuicidalPen
Hi