Lets_Hi5

Hey I’m a newbie here and I need feedback.
          
          My story is called Unholy Matrimony.
          
          I entered in the 'Watty Awards' and need your votes!
          
           (And no it doesn't have vampires and werewolves but has loads of demons and monsters :P)
          
          Here's the summary.
          
          Layla had a fairly normal life; she had loving parents, a crazy best friend, and the world at her perfectly manicured feet. But things took a turn for the worse when she was kidnapped and taken to the underworld to compete with other human and non-mortal girls as queen. Not only does she hate the Prince whose perfect idea of a first date is leaving you in a room with a monster, but he is still not over his first love's "death". How will Layla survive? And well she be able to find love in the unexpected.
          
          DUN..DUN..DUN
          
          lol, just had to do that.

Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going? Welcome to Wattpad !!!
          
          I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. Your feedback is important to me. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :))  Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  
          Here’s the link to my story chapters- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/535720-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right

paradoxpratibha

Hey Stella. 
          Welcome to wattpad. If you're a reader and not much of a writer, then I suggest some stuff which you may enjoy reading.
          I have a few poems which I've entered for the poetry contest. They're all under a story group called 'Poetry Contes Poems'. They might seem long, but they're not.
          I also have a story called 'Times Seven'. It's about a large familt with Seven Kids. Its basically a story about their adventures, fights and fun. All the events are based of real life. 
          If you like Sci-Fi, I have a book called 'The Virtual Side of Reality'. I've written three chapters and I really don't know how to continue. So, if you have a few ideas, Id love to hear them out.
          So, I really hope, you check out my works. Don't forget to vote and comment.
          If you like my works, Id love it if you fanned me!!!
          Thanks for your time
          Pratz

sparksflyupward

hey there!
          just wondering if you would read my story? :))
          
          its about Karsten Summers, a girl who is a 16 years and is just trying to make it through another day of high school hell, the death of her parents and pining over the guy who unknowingly has her heart. But when Karsten learns she is a Breaker- a magic user with the ability to break in to and out of people's dreams- her world is given a violent shake into chaos.
          
          Soon Karsten realizes that while some people dream, others have nightmares.
          
          
          feedback, votes, comments please? constructive criticism is a bonus.
          and if you "fan" me i would forever worship the ground you walk on :)
          
          THANKS! You're awesome!!

Spectre

Hey, I was wondering if you could spare some time to read some of my story, 'Raven's Footsteps'? It would be great to know what people think. Fan, vote, comment, I'm happy to return the favour if you do get some writing up :)

xiaomage94

HI...i hope that you could read my story on 'A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real"  and poems on “love and hate” and "silent love" read other poems if u have the time.
          please comment, fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks.
          PLS READ THE POEM ON” SILENT LOVE”…comment
          
          I had just posted poems on 'mourning to the silent call',’because of you’ and ’don’t leave me’ check it out and comment..thanks