SummerMelodies15

Seeing all these Tracy and mason freeland sibling edits on my fyp makes me want to give my fmc a relationship like that with her brother

SummerMelodies15

@fawnical you should finish it’s actually really good
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fawnical

@SummerMelodies15 no, I've seen only the first 20 minutes
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SummerMelodies15

@fawnical have you ever watched thirteen?
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SummerMelodies15

Seeing all these Tracy and mason freeland sibling edits on my fyp makes me want to give my fmc a relationship like that with her brother

SummerMelodies15

@fawnical you should finish it’s actually really good
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fawnical

@SummerMelodies15 no, I've seen only the first 20 minutes
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SummerMelodies15

@fawnical have you ever watched thirteen?
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fawnical

Any luck on writing anything ??

fawnical

@SummerMelodies15 yeah I know but I'm kinda lazy to write on paper :)) but ig I'll try that it actually helps me times to times
            
            Just so you know you should write something even if it's s small sentence 
            You'll never know if you never try it
            I hope that I'll meet your works soon <33
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SummerMelodies15

@claycollinssgf maybe try writing in a journal instead of on a digital platform it might help since you say that your only problem is putting words on a digital form.
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fawnical

@SummerMelodies15 well I ve got lots of ideas, I tried to organize them as much as possible but whenever I open the doc to write anything, my mind gets stuck 
            
            Like I make all those beautiful scenarios in my mind but I find inability to express them with words on any digital form
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iloverreading20

Heyyy, I noticed you like pearlescennnn's book "Hollow souls" I just want to let you know that the author copied the book "Rivals" by Linawritess that she worked very hard on. She copied the cover, the names, personalities of characters, the way the characters look, ends the chapters with "all my love" just like Linawritess does and in the latest chapters she even copied whole paragraphs and put them in the book. I would really appreciate if you could report her and maybe check out Lina's books. They're really good but if you don't believe me, you could just look into the book "Rivals" a bit, and maybe look at the author's note in "Insomniacs" and you will see that the characters are really really similar

iloverreading20

@SummerMelodies15 thank you!
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SummerMelodies15

@iloverreading20 okay thank you! I will check that out.
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SummerMelodies15

Does anyone have any tips for starting your first chapter?

wishfuldarling

@SummerMelodies15  (i know this is a little late hehe) I feel like a flashback never hurts? But i think what matters is always the first line/ sentence! Its the hook and in my past experiences in writing when you write a compelling/ hooking first sentence the rest comes much simpler! Making sure the first chapter insunates or builds up the rest of the book is VERY helpful!
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flying2neverland-

@SummerMelodies15 OMG I’m so happy my advice helped you!!! You’re so welcome!! I’m always happy to help so seriously just message me on my conversation thingy and I’ll be happy to help!! <33
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SummerMelodies15

@flying2neverland- omg yes thank you!! I’m always looking for advice and you gave me some ideas on how to write my first chapter so thank you! I think reading other books will help me figure out what direction I want to take my story in. Once again thank you!! :)
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