SummerRose928

Hi! I've recently reentered into a brief but passionate Arrowverse brainrot, which has me thinking maybe I should publish the start of my Arrowverse fic... It'd be more of a side project than my AOS one, but I've been working on it almost just as long.

Boljin

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SirChicken7143

Just wanted to let u know that ur story is amazing! I've been reading a lot of AOS stories lately and all of them either have poor pacing or do a terrible job of incorporating the OC into the story. You've managed to avoid both issues while creating a really relatable and amazing character on top of that! The idea that Gwen tries to fix things and make things better but ultimately fate makes things happen anyway is exciting and it's not until she fully embraces her powers is she finally able to change the fate of these characters. I love that feeling of isolation you are creating with Gwen once everyone knows about her powers and how it effects her relationships with the other characters. That feeling of isolation is something that very few writers are able to do well so u should be proud of urself that ur able to pull it off and stick the landing. Skye to me always felt like she always had her own feelings of isolation and distancing herself from her team in season 2 so I'd be interested to see if Gwen's own isolation helps that in any way. Either way keep it up! I certainly enjoy reading your story

thekingsucksatlife

So I really love your story and it’s inspired me to come up with my own oc story. but instead of the normal AOS I kinda wanted to use your version basically a fan fic of a fan fic. I plan on changing a lot but I really wanted to have interactions between Gwen and my character I would credit you at the beginning of every chapter. If your not comfortable with it I completely understand, thanks for making such a cool story.

thekingsucksatlife

@SummerRose928 been a while (I have been planning out the fic before had so the power scaling wouldn’t be utterly wack) but I finally wrote the next chapter I used some dialogue from your chapter 9 and was wondering if you have a discord or something I could dm you it so you could tell me if your good either the stuff I used
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SummerRose928

@thekingsucksatlife She would probably be very cautious and wary of them, since they're new. She'd probably wonder how her actions could have changed things to make this new person appear
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thekingsucksatlife

@SummerRose928 how would Gwen react to a new person joining the team since that wasn’t in the original show?
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