Hello Sumo
I just finished reading your story about Tonny and Reader and I wanted to reach out in a very honest way. There is something quietly charming about how you shaped this small world. The way Tonny and Y N both carry that tsundere feeling makes their moments feel soft but also a little tense in a way that stays with the reader. Even the opening where you said this is your first time posting and you hope people like it already gives the story a human warmth before the story even begins.
What stood out to me most is how natural the energy feels between the characters. It is simple but it has personality, especially the way you describe their interaction as tsundere Y N and tsundere Tonny. It feels like a glimpse into something bigger that could grow with time.
At the same time, it feels like this kind of story could easily be missed by readers who are not actively searching for it. Not because it is not strong, but because early work on platforms like this often gets overlooked even when it carries a lot of heart and potential.
I genuinely enjoyed the feeling behind it, and I wanted to ask, do you have any other stories you have published on Amazon or Goodreads
If you are open to it, I would really appreciate a short conversation sometime
