AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan  
          Alhamdulillah after a long time itna intezar karne ke baad itna acha aur cute chapter padhne ko mila 
          Like seriously this chapter was damn cute  Jalal ke manane ka tareeka bohot casual hai by the way  lekin bohot acha tha But we expected a kiss  like I was screaming at the end of the chapter that ek kiss toh banta hai yaar  but it's okay we loved their small moments also  Really really good writing skills ❤️
          May Allah bless you !
          May Allah bless you with lots of love and happiness !
          May Allah give you more and more success in this dunya and Akhirah 
          WE LOVE YOU SUMY MERI JAAN ❤️ 
          AND THANK YOUUUUUUUUU FOR THIS CUTEST CHAPTER 

AteefaRiyazuddin

@AteefaRiyazuddin Thank youuuuuuuu meri Jaan  
            You are the best ♥️
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Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin Awww...that's really sweet of you girl! Thank you soo much, means alot and yes aapki khwaish shayad mai next chapter me puri kardu? Let's see, stay tuned!  Thanks again ❤️
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@HiraNaz0050  i m on insta but not specific for this .... I mean waha m kuch or content post krti ho ! ...lemme know ur insta too .. I'll follow u 
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AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan ✨ 
          Thank youuuuuuuu for this cutest chapter ever and the chapter was long than the previous one so thank you  
          Thank you for completing our small wish once again ❤️
          Jalal ko nimra ko chup karane ka tarika bohot casual hai vaise toh  
          And we liked it the most !!!!
          And we really like that type of scene very much  
          So I request you from all the sumians to add more masala in that type of scene  hope you got me  
          But chapter phir bi bohot bohot bohottttt acha tha  
          Honestly very veryyyyyyyyy cute  
          And nimra especially shocked jalal oh my God  I LOVED IT THE MOST !!!
          MAY ALLAH GIVE YOU THE THOUGHT OF UPLOADING THE NEW CHAPTER !!!!!
          WE ARE DYING FOR IT  
          Please yaar sumy jaldi se Mine till Eternity upload karo na mujhse nahi hota intezaar ab 
          Please may Allah ease all of your work because kaam nahi hoga toh tum free rahogi...
          Aur jab tum free rahogi toh new story ka chapter bhi likhogi na....
          May Allah support your every works 
          May Allah guide you to the right path 
          May Allah forgive all your sins ❤️ 
          WE ALL LOVE YOU MERI JAAN !!!
          
          

AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan ✨
          Thank you soooooo much our wish that we can see clearly in the chapter 
          And saw that nimra got angry on simran and we liked it a lottttt 
          And the way nimra describes jalal handsomeness is absolutely magical 
          AND THE CONFESSION ❤️
          OH MY GOD !!!
          You stole our heart by that one confession  
          Because we already read jalal's confessions to nimra and he is a man 
          And man's confession we read it and feel like blush ❤️ 
          But when we read and listen to a girl who confesses her emotions, her love , her care WE LOVE IT ❤️
          And then our small wish is little bit completed 
          And we expect more...
          Like please don't judge me guys 
          But kitna Diya hai usme khush hona chahiye na 
          Toh I'm happy for sumians, jalal and nimra especially 
          Thank youuuuuuuu meri Jaan ✨ 
          For everything ❤️
          May Allah bless you with lots of happiness and love  
          May Allah give you success in this dunya as well as Akhirah ❤️ 
          May Allah forgive you and your family's all sins 
          May Allah bless you endless love and happiness  
          We all love you meri jaan ❤️ 
          All of the best for ahead !
          A lot more to come ✨ 
          WE LOVE YOU !!!! 

Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin Thank you so much for this lovely wish! This means alottt to me ❤️
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AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan  
          Sabse pehle toh I'm so sorry for the late review...
          Chapter bohot bohot bohottttt pasand aya 
          Like jealousy and  possessiveness se bhara hua tha ye chapter Jo padhne Mai bohot maza aya 
          We all loved the way nimra was jealous and she accepted that 
          We were happy along with Jalal 
          Because she indirectly confessed her love   little but for Jalal it is not a small thing....
          Aur chapter ke last mai jab nimra ne jalal ko coffee bana ke Diya....
          Masaledaar and namkeen coffee 
          Jalal ne kuch kahe Bina Sara piliya like seriously aysa kaheen hota hai yaar ???
          Itna sabr 
          I love the way jalal controlled himself 
          she was so proud of her husband that he didn't utter a single word ! 
          She was internally happy that she is lucky to have a husband like him  
          I'm just waiting for them to show some love  like you know right what I'm saying 
          We don't need dark romance 
          We need simple romance 
          I'm not disrespecting your writing....
          No no not at all......
          Don't misunderstand me okay ?
          Sorry if it hurts you....
          But the chapter was so good  
          You Always mesmerize us by your writing skills  
          Mashallah, Allah has given you a great mind to think ❤️
          Evil eyes off! 
          May Allah bless you!
          May Allah bless you with lots of knowledge of both dunya and Akhirah ❤️ 
          May Allah bless you with lots of happiness and love 
          May Allah forgive all your parents sins ❤️ 
          May Allah forgive your sins...
          May Allah give you hidayah ✨
          May Allah bless you with a healthy living life
          May Allah keep you always smiling as you deserve it meri Jaan  ✨ 
          Thank you soooooo much for such a great story and chapter ✨
          And extra thanks for a long challenge! 
          I love you   
          Allah Hafiz ♥️ ✨ 
          

AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan ♥️ 
          Sumyyyyyyyyyy ! 
          Yaar jalal ko na nimra ki jealously dekhne ke chakkar mai uske baad hone wala bawaal yaad nhi aata kya ????
          Nai matlab chapter ka starting itna cute tha...
          Aur ye simran ko mai ek din maar doongi 
          Jalal is always like Haye jealousy, ufff my wife's jealous, look look she is very jealous 
          But mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aate ke simran acting kar rahi hai ya sache mai voh chipku hai  
          Pata nahi next chapter kya hoga....
          Mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai...
          The way she held his hand and took him to their room 
          Pata nahi kya hoga...
          Nimra ke baaton se toh lagta hai ki Jalal nahi bachne wala hai  
          Next chapter mai toh pakka nimra simran ko thappad maar denge....
          Chapter bohot bohot bohottttt acha as always  ✨ 
          Meri hasi nahi ruk Rahi thi 
          And I'm not well and i was crying too because of my condition...
          But this girl has light up my mood in just seconds ❤️
          I'm smiling and laughing so hard ❤️
          Thank youuuuuuuu meri Jaan  ✨ 
          Aapka chapter padhne ke baad bohot acha lag raha hai....
          Bas ayse hi likhti raho aur aapna khayal rakhna theek hai  
          Aur aapka school bhi important hai toh please thodi mehnat karke acha percentage laake aapne parents ko proud karwana hain tumhe (aur sumians ko bhi)
          May Allah bless you ! 
          May Allah bless you with lots of knowledge of both dunya and Akhirah ❤️ 
          May you be happy and successful ☺️ 
          May you get a husband like Jalal(orhan)
          Ameen ! 
          We all love you! Be happy and healthy...
          And thank you soooooo much such a cutest chapter  ✨ 
          Evil eyes off... 
          I love you sumy meri Jaan  ✨ 
          

Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin This is so close to my heart! Thank you so much for your lovely comment! ❤️
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AteefaRiyazuddin

And it's my request to all the sumians ! 
          Please appreciate my dearest author  
          Please it's my request because she is so hardworking girl ! 
          Hamari author aapna school ke notes aur novel do manage kar rahi hai
          Mashallah she is getting votes and comments....
          But please appreciate her work ! 
          Aapka ek vote se voh kitni kush ho jati hai hamari author  
          So PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE HER ! ❤️

Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin That's so sweet of you! Thank you so much ❤️
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AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan ♥️ 
          Yaar mai kya ji bataon is chapter ke bare mai.... ????
          Itna cute conversation tha isme ❤️
          Aur zyadatar readers ko Sirf nimra aur jalal ka conversation chahiye tha....
          Toh is chapter mai 99% unka hi conversation tha Jo mujhe bohot bohot bohottttt pasand aya 
          His teasing level is mashallah yaar ufff  
          Jalal nimra ko tease kar Raha tha lekin mai kyun yahan blush kar Rahi hoon ????? 
          Pata nahi ye Mera sabse favourite chapter hai i swear 
          Mujhe pata hai ki aapka school bhi shuru hogaye hain aur jaisa aapne bola ki homework bhi tha....
          Toh mai feel kar sakti hoon ke school ke homeworks aur novel likhna kitna mushkil hota hai....
          Bas aapka likhna worth hona chahiye in sha allah....
          May Allah bless you meri Jaan  
          Bas apne aap par zyada burden mat karna.....
          Don't take stress and take care 
          And please focus on your studies also because Allah na kare agar aapke marks Kam aagaye toh mai nahi chahti ke aapke parents aapko daate aur aapka likhna mai kuch effect ho.....
          I don't want you to get scolded from your parents just because of your writing....
          May Allah forgive all your sins ❤️ 
          Don't lose hope Allah is with you...
          Your parents are with you 
          And I'm with you 
          Thank you soooooooo much such a cutest chapter ! ❤️
          I love you !  
          Allah Hafiz ♥️✨

Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin Awww...you just changed my mood! Thank you so much for this, this really consoled my heart! Thank you so much, I love you so much ❤️
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AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan !!!!!!!! ♥️
          Yaar mai kya boloon words nahi hai is chapter ka review Dene ke liye 
          Pehle toh ye chapter long tha previous chapter se Jo ki padhne Mai bohot acha tha !!!! 
          Kahan se laate ho ayse dialogue's ufff  
          Pata nahi mai kun blush kiye ja Rahi hoon 
          Jalal's dialogue, his teasing,his possessiveness, his care , his love towards nimra ARE JUST MASHALLAH ✨♥️ 
          It literally gives me butterflies everywhere  
          Ye story padhne ke baad aysa lagta hai ki aysa chara really exists karta hai 
          Chapter bohot bohot bohottttt acha tha !!!! ♥️ 
          I really appreciate your work 
          This story never leaves my mind 
          I'll just be thinking of this story everytime  
          Especially the dialogue's yaar   Honestly I LOVE THIS CHAPTER 
          Thank you soooooo much for such a cutest, long , great chapter meri Jaan ♥️ 
          Just don't lose hope I'm with you always as I always remember you and your story in my every dua's ✨
          And some days later your school will be started so please focus on your studies too because Allah na kare if you get less marks then your parents must scold you and I don't want my dear author to get scolded in any of the matter....
          I will make dua for you especially for your exams as we both should write boards this year......
          In sha Allah we both will get passed by getting great percentage by the grace of Allah In sha Allah ❤️ 
          I love you Meri Jaan ! ♥️
          

Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin Allah Allah  thank you so much cutie, love you too ❤️
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AteefaRiyazuddin

Assalamualaikum Meri Jaan !!!!!♥️
          Jaise mai ne bola ke chapter mai thoda bohot twist hona chahiya warna interesting nahi hoga toh.....
          Toh ye chapter mere imagination se kaahi zyada acha laga kyunke bohot Sara twist tha is chapter mai 
          Jalal ka mazak nimra ko serious laga lekin nimra ne shuru Kiya tha aur jalal jealousy ke wajah se nimra ka hi joke us pe phir se bol diya.....
          Magar jalal ko uski galti ka ehsaas ho 
          Gaya hai ki use aysa mazaak nimra ke saath nahi karna chahiya tha.....
          I feel really really bad for Jalal and Nimra 
          Lekin sabko pata hai ki aakhir mai un dono ko kush rehna hai ek saath ♥️
          Chapter ke beech Mai aysa hona chahiye ke ladki ladke se naraaz ho aur ladka apni sachi mohabbat se usko maanaye 
          Arey yahi toh hota hai sacha pyaar....
          Yahi toh hota hai apni mohabbat sabit karne ka asli chance ! 
          Aur mujhe meri Jaan par poora yakeen hai jab voh story mai jalal nimra se maafi maangega tab ayse lafz use karega ke nimra use phir se pehle se zyada mohabbat karegi In sha allah!✨❤️
          I trust you the most ! 
          Allah is with you.... 
          Don't lose hope I'm with you always supporting and encouraging to you in every aspect of life 
          Thank youuuuuuuu for this twist full chapter ! 
          And LOVE YOU MERI JAAN ❤️

Sumys_bookshelf

@AteefaRiyazuddin Walaikum assalam! Thank you so much for such a sweet review my love! Thank you so much! You know me so well and yes, you guessed it right, you'll fall for him even more after you read the next chapter! Stay updated! Thank you so much once again...love you ❤️
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