Aussiie_
Heya sunbreaker! So basically you need to tell me what you plan to happen in part 3? Do you want him to find a cottage? Or maybe a girl? Is there any magical creatures? The first thing you always need to do is to plan it. I personally get all my best ideas when I'm in bed then I write them all down in notes then write it up in neat after I figure out how the chapter is going to play out. Also try use a wide range of interesting vocabulary! Your word choices are awesome and your story line and plot are really creative! I'm really enjoying this and feel free to ask me for advise anytime. I am not a very good writer but I can try my best to help you.
SunBreakerBoyX
alright then thanks for giving me some advice I'll try to think of a plan and I'll tell you when I think of it
