Sun

Echoes is being completely revamped. The date for the first book is unknown.

I've just finished reading your book. The storyline is amazing, but, I feel like it's not organized. There are many grammar mistakes and it makes it feel rushed and shorter than it is. I suggest trying to get family or friends to read your book and get their opinion on it. Try adding more characters, stories, and maybe not have the reason Rottonpaw is attacking clans be for just the sake of being seen