Kingsrabbit
Nice story. I’ll read/ vote, then when I have a little more time ( I’m at my coffee shop, reading between customers, lol) I’ll make some friendly ( always, no criticism, life is difficult enough, yeah?) editing suggestions, and point out some grammar, spelling, etc. :) have a great day.
Sunflower_444_Emo
@Kingsrabbit Thank you so much. It's always been a dream of mine to be a writer and I have been telling my friends and some of my family to read it and half of them didn't take me seriously and it hurt that they didn't think I could be a good writer. I just really wanna improve so I can my dream can finally be a reality so I really appreciate it.