I finally got chapter 2 fixed! Please let me know what you guys think!
Also, please check out my Archive of Our Own ;) I might be posting my SVU one-shot storyline fics on here soon.
https://archiveofourown.org/users/TheUnknownSchuylerSister
I've also decided that I'm going to post my story on Tumblr, so look out for that as well. The link to that is in my bio!
I should have chapter three of Ohana posted by the end of this week or early next week.