ybrihi
Hi I read your story (starstruck) and I really liked it,so I was wondering if you have time , can you read mine cause I really need some advice and by the way you're in the right way
Sunnyday365
@ybrihi This is definitely coming along. The flow is much easier to follow. Great job! Keep up the diligent work
ybrihi
@ Sunnyday365 hi Sunnyday. I wanted to thank you again for your advice. I tried to fix all the mistakes and I will be really pleased to take your opinion of it now if possible !!