Princess Caprice

Hey I know its been only three days but I'm just checking to see on the progress.

Heeey, I'm just checking on you to see how you are doing. Also, where is everyone? I haven't got a notification saying they voted or commented OR replied to my announcements. It's making me .... worry. I hope everything is good on your end. 
          
          From: Hiva Prime. <3

Hello there I know its been a while since I asked this but I was wondering if you've figured out a way to combined the original draft along with your tweeked suggestive sentences while making sense & keeping it the original flow?

@SunsetCloudHunter * smiles *

Thanks for the follow! 

Annnnd... I'm grounded... all next week... so I won't be on here from tomorrow to next week... :( so I won't be able to work on the cover Hiva :( sorry... 
          
          p.s. it's all my brothers fault they made her mad not me. I was just in the room...

Hey I'm just checking in & not rushing when I'm about to ask you if you've figured out the stuff I talked with you about a few days ago? If not I completely understand.

Hey so I like what you wrote  but I still wanna add the stuff my friend from Discord wrote for the first draft. So would you mind looking at the stuff of the first draft I sent you then look at what you put in for the highlighted sentences that I send you this past Saturday & see if you can come with that scene with the combined stuff?

It was Solar Noon when Zeng returned to the Valley of Peace with the scroll clutched in his feet as he arrives at the Jade Palace landing in front of the main doors. Opening the right gate door with his right wing then waddles through while heading up towards the palace's main building located at the top. He enters the Hall of Heroes & waddles over to the left side where the scroll room's located, entering it to find Shifu is not there. This makes his mind jump to where his master could be until he figures out the three places Shifu could be.
          
          
          Hey I'm not sending this to you for editing I'm sending you to see the two paragraph should be like this or seperated? The point where its connect & not seperated like before is when it says He enters the Hall of Heroes.

Hey I can't believe the online drama going on right now in the transformers fandom. I mostly try to stay out of drama bcs i've had my share in the past with a hacker then being blocked and told to hurt myself by multiple people. But i've put that behind me. back to the now, I've tried to stay out of it but I can't help but find myself reading all the comments on here and on Deviantart and I want to ask why people say stuff and then other people either get defencive or misunderstand, after that all hell breaks loose. 
          I want to know what people have going through their minds as they think there deflating a situation when there only shoveling coals on a fire? instead people should ask why, come at it with a curious attitude instead of making situations worse.
           I want to know what goes on in peoples mind when they think you don't have a life of your own so they get mad at you for basically living? 
          Last but not least I want to know why people think it's okay to use people's pasts against you or set it up to guilt you?