@shadowedlotus Hey there, please do not worry at all, we all need to get our book to other people's attention in some way or another. I'd love to see your book, though I'm sorry as I won't be reading all of it even if I like it, not because of any imperfection on your part, but because I'm just lazy that way XD. I'm struggling with getting readers as well, though, especially comments (my story may have 40+ views, but at least 25 of them are me rechecking it) so I'd like to strike a deal? How about I read one, (or two, depending on word count) parts of your story, and comment on them if possible, and you do the same for one of my stories? (Any one you choose) Reply back if interested!