Hello! Sorry to bother but I've been reading your Stars book about Iceman bc he's literally my favourite. Anyway I just started writing a fanfic about him and I was wondering if you could maybe give me some constructive criticism on it? Since I haven't written much in English. You don't have to ofc ♡ I'm sorry to bother again, I hate to be the person who does this. Stars is rlly amazing btw! Thanks in advance <33