They say you don't learn anything from anyone until they disagree with you. At first, I disagreed with you. But now, I am having second thoughts. I nearly struggled with the first 10 chapters of Blood and Ashes! Now, maybe I know why! Thank you for your input and I will try a lot harder to make the dialogue blossom with clarity!!! I WELCOME ANY advise you have on any chapter in any of my books. Thanks again for the comments!!!
Sincerely, BCG