No problem :) I started reading your story because you asked me to. I was going to leave a message on your wall, but I can also give feedback here. I have to admit that I have a bit of a mixed feeling about your story. At first, I was amazed by the great writing and kept reading because of that. But as the story progressed, I got the feeling more and more that it was created by AI. I hope I'm wrong, but there are some quirks in the text that I don't think would occur in a human-written text. I hope you're honest with yourself and your readers. With all due respect: you won't develop as a writer if you let AI create your story.